Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with?
It is an undeniable fact that the internet has brought enormous changes to modern life. A controversial question that may arise in this regard as to whether this huge accessibility to information is beneficial or not. I firmly believe that Its merits outweigh the demerits since it provides a widespread awareness, free and unlimited sources for education, and highest living standards.
To begin with, it is crystal clear that nowadays, people's awareness has improved significantly thanks to the online data. In the past, individuals had limited access to the information; They had to go to the library or study in books about a particular subject; However, these days, the internet has made easy access to the information. For instance, everybody could reach the data through their smartphones freely.
Secondly, educational developments undoubtedly have been one of the internet's outstanding achievements. Online courses from renowned universities like Harvard and Stanford are accessible to everyone, especially in the developing countries, which the educational systems have not developed ideally, individuals could use these sources of invaluable information without a high charge.
Last but not least, With the help of the internet, which gathered a huge population in recent decades, the global issues which can increase the living standards are being promoted. Take the environmental pollution as an example, With the aim of the internet people know about the effects of pollution on their living conditions; as a result, they put more pressure on the industries which release an enormous amount of toxic pollutants to the atmosphere; like crude oil refinery companies or car-producing factories to adhere to the environmental rules. Even though these are more costly for the industry, but society as a whole would benefit from it. Thanks to the greate awareness that widespread online community brings about.
To sum up, I think it is now clear how the internet helped modern society to be more cautious about its surroundings, besides, its advantages in the promotion of education is undeniable. It is predicted that extensive use of the internet would bring more for the well-being of the individuals.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... question that may arise in this regard as to whether this huge accessibility to information ...
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...he well-being of the individuals.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, as to, for instance, i think, as a result, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1900.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 346.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49132947977 4.8611393121 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06485958822 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586705202312 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 597.6 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 82.0904180443 48.9658058833 168% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.714285714 100.406767564 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7142857143 20.6045352989 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07142857143 5.45110844103 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145578443131 0.236089414692 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0434317054658 0.076458572812 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0392412603796 0.0737576698707 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0727350630992 0.150856017488 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355490094218 0.0645574589148 55% => OK
automated_readability_index: 16.8 11.7677419355 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 58.1214874552 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 10.9000537634 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.94 8.01818996416 124% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 86.8835125448 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.002688172 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.