Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is better for children to choose jobs that are similar to their parents’ jobs than to choose jobs that are very different from their parents’ job.
No one can cast a shadow of doubt on the importance of the role which experience plays in modern society. A controversial question which is often raised in the area of future occupation is whether one should continue to his parent's job, or should begin a new journey. Depending on their personality, personal experience, and emotional concerns, people have different attitudes toward this issue. I personally, prefer to do the same job as my parent's job; because it is low risk, easily expandable, and easy to prosper.
The first reason that comes to mind in the first glance, is the low risk of bankruptcy in the beginning. It is established beyond doubt that every job has its ups and downs when an individual is completely aware of the surrounding factors affecting the career,it is more convenient to manage the upcoming crisis. For instance, If my father had lost some money due to the adverse investment on unpopular goods, with this in mind, I never repeat the same mistake, or if there is a probability of the recession in the country, I will direct my investments on foreign business.
Second, When an amateur worker initiates a career that his or her parents support him; in terms of giving experiences, There is a big chance that one could expand his or her business in relatively limited time. It takes years for a beginner to evaluate every aspect of the job, so as to expand his job by adding new branches or other related tasks. However, with the help of a professional in his field, one is more likely to expand the profession.
Last but not least, It is more efficient to do the jobs that you know its tricky aspects. It is crystal clear that with the search of the unlimited information on the net, one can acquire related knowledge of the prospect job. Nevertheless, Some of the significant data come from experience. The practice of the different dimension of the job; For example, Where to buy, how to buy, how to find customers, could be achieved from parents who are aware of the conditions.
To sum up, considering the mentioned reasons, I think it is now clear that following parental jobs are advantageous. Although, it was just a story in a nutshell, and there are definitely other reasons that should be considered. Repeating the same jobs not only reduces the risks but also guarantee financial success and prosperity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, nevertheless, second, so, as to, for example, for instance, i think, you know, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1973.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 407.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84766584767 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81379671648 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562653562654 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 621.9 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4813935182 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.058823529 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9411764706 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290779000654 0.236089414692 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0869722943308 0.076458572812 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0737357285224 0.0737576698707 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157467417321 0.150856017488 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0665118644284 0.0645574589148 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 86.8835125448 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.