Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Students do reading by their own personality is as important as, or more important than reading assigned by teachers.
Nowadays, everybody is aware of the importance of teaching. No one asserts that education is not a very important factor in this era. Two key factors that leads to a better learning are reading, and being able to read journals, and newspapers. There has always been a controversy among different people whether it is important that students read by their own personality or not.
The most remarkable demerit of the idea that students also read by their own personality is that they can make mistake in reading different materials, and if no one corrects them, and helps them, they will go in a wrong route which may have bad effect on them. Teachers usually give enough homework, and assignments to students. This personal effort on reading can cause a massive job, and students are prone to be under a lot of pressure which has many side effects.
On the other hand, the first and foremost privilege of the idea of self-reading is that it helps students to get more familiar with different materials. This self-reading can improve student’s performance in the class. As a result, he or she feels more confident in the class, and enjoys going to class. According to an experiment which is done in Iran about this topic, twenty five percent of students who attend school do self-reading besides their teacher’s assignments. Among these students, fifteen percent of them achieve a good grade during their exams. More experiments show that these students who have self-reading besides their teacher’s homework have better understanding of literature, and can improve their skills on different fields like mathematic, chemistry, biology.
In addition, another advantage of the aforementioned idea is that students which do self-reading have better self-confidence in compare with their friends. This self-confidence among them leads to a better future which is one of their parents’ desires. In the future, these kind of students can become a president, and council members of the society. This self-confidence is one of the most important skills that students should try to gain during childhood because many of their future works need this characteristic. This skill helps you to do your jobs with more confident, and never think that you are going to lose in this way.
To put the issue into perspective, self-reading has many advantages like increasing self-confidence, improving student’s performance in the class, and disadvantages like putting students under pressure which may be harmful for them. In my point of view, the advantages of the idea of self-reading far outweighs its aforementioned under privileges. So it is a reasonable idea for students to follow self-reading besides of their teacher’s homework.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 276, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...r parents' desires. In the future, these kind of students can become a president, and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, if, may, so, in addition, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2398.0 1977.66487455 121% => OK
No of words: 440.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45 4.8611393121 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57997565096 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.32472580116 2.67179642975 124% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522727272727 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 704.7 618.680645161 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 11.0 1.86738351254 589% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 101.642073528 48.9658058833 208% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 133.222222222 100.406767564 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4444444444 20.6045352989 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11111111111 5.45110844103 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300551937573 0.236089414692 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0987212636726 0.076458572812 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596808352212 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183683056343 0.150856017488 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375508569731 0.0645574589148 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 11.7677419355 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 58.1214874552 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 10.9000537634 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24 Out of 30
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