Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? For success in a future job, the ability to relate well to people is more important than studying hard in school. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Throughot history people are following to success in their life. people can get success from many ways. some people believe success obtain from good communication with other ones and some think studying hard in a key factor. I am on the belief that the ability to interact well with other one is a pivotal factor. In the following essay I elaborated my issues.
first, if sombody has ability to communicate with other one can easily influence on them. communication such as ability to speak with other one without jeopordise them in a key factor. For example, in the university I had a friend that had a ability to get along to others and in comparison to students that only were hardworking in university material the first one got improved better.
second, people with good relationship can pave the way for themselves with less effort. they can reach to better occupation vocation even better mariage if they have ability to impact on other one. Take my self as an example, I was very introverted when I joind to a company two years ago and I couldnot reach my goalss because I didnot have ability to communicate with my boss and other co-workers. if I had better relationship whth them I could reach to higher level in my work place definitaly.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that people with good communication because of better influence on others and less effort for their duty are successful than second group.
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...cate with my boss and other co-workers. if I had better relationship whth them I c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, well, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1184.0 1977.66487455 60% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 246.0 407.700716846 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81300813008 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.48103885553 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72540892175 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 212.727598566 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520325203252 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 618.680645161 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0838734845 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0769230769 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9230769231 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92307692308 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158845685798 0.236089414692 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0709813466881 0.076458572812 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.040728953661 0.0737576698707 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112539200155 0.150856017488 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0497493641907 0.0645574589148 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 86.8835125448 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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