Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers should not make their social or political views known to students in the classroom.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
I agree with this statement and think that it is better for students not to know their teacher's perspective. In the following paragraphs I will explain the reasons why I have this idea.
At the first step, if the student were aware of their teacher's opinion they would feel less freedom to declare and defend from theirs. I think children are used to believe in their tutor's sayings and this would affect them to also prejudge that this social or political opinion is also a true statement and would never bother to challenge this idea.
Furthermore, I believe that this knowledge of the teacher's idea would make them to get frightened to claim theirs. They would think that their declaration of their own opinions would put their grader against them. In their opinion, this controversy between these two will affect their grades on their exams and school performance which would in turn cause them not to take another side.
Third, the teacher is supposed to be a mentor further to just course tutor. With this knowledge of his/her opinion in mind students are being somehow forced to shape their ideas and perspectives and decreasing their chance to think freely and independently. Thus, it would not be appropriate for teachers to force them to get an idea about political or social aspects of people's life.
These were my ideas and reason about declaration of teacher's opinions about non-academic issues. Thus I firmly believe that hiding their perspective toward these issues would be a more suitable choice for teachers.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'teachers'' or 'teacher's'?
Suggestion: teachers'; teacher's
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...ers opinions about non-academic issues. Thus I firmly believe that hiding their pers...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, so, third, thus, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1281.0 1977.66487455 65% => OK
No of words: 257.0 407.700716846 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98443579767 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51036398894 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 212.727598566 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536964980545 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 379.8 618.680645161 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.112565665 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.75 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4166666667 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170270379794 0.236089414692 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0784758595661 0.076458572812 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465500185093 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115719603245 0.150856017488 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0500316788546 0.0645574589148 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 86.8835125448 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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