Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Teachers are an essential part of the education process, and the social status of the teacher was valued by society. Personally, I believe that the prestigious of being a teacher is less than it used to be in the past. I feel this way for several reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, the importance of the school itself as an institution that offers knowledge has declined during the last decade. Therefore, the teacher is no longer appreciated as before. In fact. teachers used to be the most important source of knowledge, but nowadays they are not. The internet and the ability to access into any information in any field made the function of teachers is not very central to acquire knowledge. For example, before the internet, if the student faced difficulty in understanding a topic in his science subject in the school, he had to go to the teacher and ask him an explanation. While nowadays, he could search for this on the internet and he might find a good specialized site in science, thus he does not need to go to the science teacher.
Secondly, many reports have shown that teachers' abilities and skills nowadays are less quality comparing to old teachers. As a result, students do not gain too much from their teachers. For instance, when I think about the role of my teachers im my educational background, I do not feel that they gave the knowledge I need and the skills that I should have. On the other hand, my father is very grateful for his teachers, because he believes that they supplied him with the required skills that he used in the rest of his life.
Finally, the new economic system that we live in makes teaching as a career not as attractive as engineering or accounting or business. Therefore, the teacher's economic position and social status are not valued as other careers.
To conclude, teachers in the present are not valued as in the past due to the various sources of knowledge available nowadays, teachers' lack of the required skills and the nature of the modern economic system.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Teachers
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, i feel, i think, in fact, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1708.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 359.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75766016713 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67490122471 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529247910864 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3426322597 48.9658058833 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.75 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4375 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 5.45110844103 193% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174465213751 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0561710256007 0.076458572812 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042990510829 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100370470091 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0369918235077 0.0645574589148 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25 Out of 30
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