Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Telephone has greater influence on people’s lives than television has.
Since the dawn of civilization, making connections to other people was has been an undeniable demand of man. Many inventions such as telegram, telephone, television and internet have been provided in order to answer/meet/satisfy to this demand. While the majority of people may be of the opinion that telephone has greater influence on people’s lives, I, personally believe that the effects of televisions are more important. In the following paragraphs, I will delve into the most conspicuous reasons.
One of the reasons coming to mind at first is that television plays a crucial role in informing people of every important events, accidents, natural disasters or wars all over the world. The importance of this role reveals is revealed when some people in the world are in a situation which they need help of other people from different parts of the world. Take Bam earthquake as an example. As soon as the deadly earthquake happened in Iran, many channels covered the news of the earthquake. As a result, not only did Iranians help their people, but also other people from other countries sent help. Comparing itCompared with telephone, it is clearly understood that these kinds of worldwide informing cannot happen by using phone in a short time.
Another equally noteworthy point is that there are a great dealnumber of documentaries provided for people which are shown in on television. These documentaries increase the general knowledge of people in many fields such as biology or the science of animals. According to the statistics conducted in my area recently, people are more likely to gain these this knowledge from documentaries than books or papers. Also, some documentaries are made in forms of animations for kids children as they like watching television, they can learn things from these kinds of animations unconsciously.
Last but not the list, the advertisements shown in on television are the most convenient way to introduce new materials to people and find customers. Existence of some channels which only show advertisement during the day proves that the role of television advertisement in people’s life is undeniable. It is beneficial for both the consumer and the company. The company can present the advantageous advantages of its product and the consumer can be informed about different products and choose which one to use.
To wrap it up, the aforementioned reasons lead us to the conclusion that, clearly, television has affected our lives more than telephone has. However, that was a story in a nutshell. There are other reasons and examples, which are not mentioned above due to the dearth of time. Finally, to find a better understanding, it is suggested that a research be held/carried out/conducted to find out what is actually the answer of this question.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, first, however, if, may, so, while, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 70.0 52.1666666667 134% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2365.0 1977.66487455 120% => OK
No of words: 455.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1978021978 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61852021839 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.082957975 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 246.0 212.727598566 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540659340659 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 745.2 618.680645161 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7633568749 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.5 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6818181818 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.90909090909 5.45110844103 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188496342119 0.236089414692 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0464793604785 0.076458572812 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0605332097007 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.097527226051 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0470754127929 0.0645574589148 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 86.8835125448 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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