Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television advertising directed towards young children (aged two to five) should not be allowed. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
procrastination is a bad habit, it can lead you to a convoluted situation and may also affect the result while working each day on the given task will reduce the pressure of completing it on the due date. Therefore, I will prefer to work on my assignment little bit every day than to complete it within the last four or five days before the deadline. I feel this way for a few reasons which I will expound on in the following essay.
To start with, Apart from doing assignments, given by a teacher of a particular subject, students also have other works to do; preparing for the competitive exam, doing assignments of other subjects, or going for sports practice. so, it is better to try to complete your most difficult and lengthy assignment by doing it every day, especially in your spare time. this will not only save your time but also help you complete it with great accuracy. Usually, when a student tries to complete their long assignment a few days before the deadline, they end up doing it wrong. For instance, when I was in the final year of my graduation and we all had to submit our project report. The submission date was already announced one month before. but due to my procrastination habit, I completed it on the submission date and this leads me to a bad grade in my final year semester. From then only I decided that I will take out a few hours every day to complete a long assignment or project so that I do not get trapped in such a sophisticated situation again.
Further, when you give time to your assignment every day, you can also take help from your professor or friends. For example, if you get stuck while doing the particular question of the assignment then you can reach out for the help of others because you will have enough time to complete it. this also helps to improve your work. Conversely, if you try to do the same work at the end of the assessment day then it may be possible that you may end up in a frustrating situation. There will be no one to help you out because other students may be also busy with doing their assignments and it is not necessary that the professor will available when you felt the need. Hence, it will end up with negative results.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that we should try to do a little of our difficult and long assignments every day. this will not only help you to get a good grade but also you can focus on the other work easily.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Procrastination
procrastination is a bad habit, it can lead you to a co...
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...ery day, especially in your spare time. this will not only save your time but also h...
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...fficult and long assignments every day. this will not only help you to get a good gr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, hence, if, may, so, then, therefore, while, apart from, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 9.8082437276 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 62.0 43.0788530466 144% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1981.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 447.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.43176733781 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59808378696 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5795997538 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.436241610738 0.524837075471 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 620.1 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0326447712 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.263157895 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5263157895 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.47368421053 5.45110844103 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129569402837 0.236089414692 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0502645464873 0.076458572812 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0344062033195 0.0737576698707 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0877232514117 0.150856017488 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0342413273709 0.0645574589148 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 58.1214874552 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.71 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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