Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television has destroyed communication among friends and family. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinions.
Some people think that television has destroyed communication among friends and family. In my opinion, however, I oppose to it. Television could strengthen communication among people. Many TV programs and news allow us to discuss with the family. TV helps us to understand each other better. TV also helps to share interest with others.
Everyday When we turn on TV, we see different channels with specific programs. These programs and news report new things from all around world and some of them are very disputable and people like to argue about them. As the result, people may gather together to express their opinion in the subject. For example, news report about problem in something may cause to the members of family tells their solutions. So As you can see, by watching to news, they communicate with each other.
TV helps us to understand each other better. For example, I saw the TV show yesterday and It was about job condition in some european countries. It reported unemployment rate which was as much as our country which young people encounter in our country. Consequently this make to understand the life difficulty of jobless people in the homeland.
Lastly, Most people share interest with others. Some people like sports and watch sport programs in TV . People who watch documentary program they have interest in the science. If our friends or family watch to the same programs that is your favorite, they will be aware of your interest. That is a excellent form of communication among people with the same opinion.
In conclusion, TV does not only increase knowledge and entertain people, but also increase communication and relation. TV is a tool for communicating among socities especially among families and friends. People will be able to communicate with the help of TV programs, since TV makes to share interest, understand each other and discuss about thing.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: Every day
...o helps to share interest with others. Everyday When we turn on TV, we see different ch...
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Line 3, column 253, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Consequently,
... young people encounter in our country. Consequently this make to understand the life diffic...
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Line 4, column 102, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ke sports and watch sport programs in TV . People who watch documentary program th...
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Line 4, column 297, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...will be aware of your interest. That is a excellent form of communication among p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, lastly, may, so, then, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1579.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 313.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0447284345 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72111162144 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 212.727598566 80% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546325878594 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.7150296444 48.9658058833 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.652173913 100.406767564 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6086956522 20.6045352989 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4347826087 5.45110844103 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146975538639 0.236089414692 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0540765427619 0.076458572812 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0729310409241 0.0737576698707 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0918036663499 0.150856017488 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0669617585319 0.0645574589148 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.36 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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