Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Man needs to move from one place to another place for living. Cars are the best invention of modern engineering and technology. Although some people believe that as the amount of fossil fuels is decreasing, the number of cars will also be decreased in twenty years. However, In my view, I think that because of the increasing economy in underdeveloped and developing countries and the increasing renewable energy, the number of cars will be increased day by day.
First, the economical condition is developing in third world countries. People of the third world are following the lifestyle of developed countries, which triggers them to buy their own car. For example, My uncle does a government job in Bangladesh which is the most promising developing country, and Bangladesh bank is now giving car loans to their govt. employee. My uncle has a family of 5 members and owned a car 5 years ago. Because of the govt. loan, he intends to buy another car that will be used by other family members.
Second, fossils fuel is decreasing, but in coming years, other alternative sources of energy will be discovered, and meanwhile developed countries are using this kind of energy. For instance, Elon Musk's car company recently has invented TESLA which runs by using electricity. And this electricity can be produced from nuclear energy or renewable energy like solar, wind, sea wave, etc.
In conclusion with the above in mind, in twenty years cars' number will not be reduced but will be increased than are today because of alternative energy sources and increased economy of third world countries.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, third, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, kind of, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 43.0788530466 30% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1335.0 1977.66487455 68% => OK
No of words: 266.0 407.700716846 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01879699248 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71643272093 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 212.727598566 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548872180451 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 618.680645161 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.1752772942 48.9658058833 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.3571428571 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07142857143 5.45110844103 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210172837715 0.236089414692 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0705709870106 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0642446738616 0.0737576698707 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139595773642 0.150856017488 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0493920417571 0.0645574589148 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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