Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
With the appearance of new technology, things which used to be popular and widely used keep turning into antiques in museums and many believe that cars will be among those things in the future. Modern science and technology development changes with each new day, it is no wonder that transportations will also change rapidly and there will be fewer cars in the future.
Technologies changes so quickly that we may have new transportations in the future. The novel "Twenty Thousand Leagues Under The Sea" describes an enclosed boat which can travel under the sea, but not after so long time the submarine roaring across the horizon. We can always see something which used to be fiction turns out to be true a few minutes later. People are all like new things, so it is no wonder that when the new modes of transportation appear they may choose the new way to go outside but not the car.
Another reason which may lessen the use of the car is the convenience of public transportation. In many big cities, traffic jams caused by early peaks trouble people who have so much work to do. So many people arrive at their companies later and late for their important meetings by driving while people come there on time by subway. Cars may lead to so many time managing problems in big cities and public transportation is obvious a more effective way to save time.
Although we know that cars are significant inventions in human civilization, we cannot deny the pollution they carry. The gases they emit may pollute the environment and cause greenhouse effect. Also, cars cost so much fuel oil and petroleum is non-renewable resources. As so many environmental problems are caused by cars, we have to reduce the use of cars in order to protect the earth which is our common homeland.
So it is not hard to imagine why there will be fewer cars in twenty years for the rapidly changes in technology, the convenience of public transportation and the protection for the earth.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1644.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 343.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79300291545 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75210320079 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536443148688 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2495925906 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.6 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8666666667 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.93333333333 5.45110844103 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177861266218 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0641863840604 0.076458572812 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0639849649515 0.0737576698707 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113503460438 0.150856017488 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0631989404649 0.0645574589148 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.