Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
A controversial issue relating to whether the university should invest equally to social activities as important classes, has brought to the attention of students. Some students believe that colleges should invest more in sports. However, in my opinion, universities should allocate their funds on libraries instead of social activities.
First of all, learning process is a crucial part of students academic preparation. Therefore, universities unquestionably should invest to improve the quality of important classes and the maintenance of libraries. For example, the most prestigious universities, have created their reputation based on their best programs that provide to their students. Moreover, advancing this part, would really help the university to keep the good name and attract more young learners on their wings. That is why, universities should spend money on creating new programs, which would not solely help young adults, but also put their level in high-ranked position.
Furthermore, if colleges provide a considerable amount of their funds on academic classes, they would be able to increase the competition with other universities that are classified at a higher rank, according to what they provide. For instance, to put it with other words, increasing and paying more attention to research projects, students who are involved, would be able to compete with students of other colleges that are already participating on the same research. In fact, this competition, would help teenagers to build a higher competitive spirit and become confident. Overall, students who become part of these competitive activities, would not only learn new skills, but also enjoy their assignment.
In conclusion, universities should invest in science and academic subjects rather then in sports. This is because colleges would have the opportunity to attract more students and increase their reputation. And because, colleges would increase their competition with other schools for the same research project that might take place as an education task.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 83, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'? 'than' is used for comparisons, 'then' is an expression of time.
Suggestion: than
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, really, so, then, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1754.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 310.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65806451613 4.8611393121 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94743402398 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532258064516 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8162364997 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.933333333 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7333333333 5.45110844103 197% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133314918064 0.236089414692 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0546987947111 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490316817573 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100225313895 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.055228712986 0.0645574589148 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 11.7677419355 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 10.9000537634 143% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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