Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
A controversial issue relating to whether the life was easier in the past when our grandparents live or not, has brought to the attention of public. Relevant people think that the life was easier before than it is today, However, in my opinion, life is easier today than in the past.
First of all, nowadays, everyone has access to health care, which enables individuals to be healthier than they were in the past. To say it differently, today the majority of population live longer because they take the health care that they need. For example, four decades ago, the healthcare system was not advanced as it is in this time and age. Thus, this improvement has made possible for anyone to stay healthy and live an easy life. Evidence has shown that in the past, nearly 60 percent of people had lost their lives because the health system failed to cure their health issues. Consequently, people's lives were not comfortable for everyone. On the contrary, in present times, health system is advanced and everyone has access to it.
That is why, today people live a easy life, in terms of the health care service.
Furthermore, leaving in current time and age people have more opportunities to enjoy their lives by being creative and innovate meaningful things. Moreover, this flexibility and desire to thrive comes from the development of the education system. For instance, in past decades, only a limited number of people had the opportunity to continue their education. Therefore, people had to work random and heavy jobs because they did not possessed the degrees that would allow them to work their favorite jobs. On the opposite, today everyone could enroll in universities and receive the degrees they would like to have. Overall, this tells us that today, adults could educate themselves because the opportunities are enormous. As a result people could enjoy their lives and become realized.
In conclusion, nowadays people should be aware that their lives are much better than it use to be in the past. This is because the today the healthcare system is more advanced and everyone has access on it, and because people have more opportunities to educate themselves and make their lives better than it was in the past.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 32, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... to it. That is why, today people live a easy life, in terms of the health care ...
^
Line 6, column 433, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'possess'
Suggestion: possess
...dom and heavy jobs because they did not possessed the degrees that would allow them to wo...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 89, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...hat their lives are much better than it use to be in the past. This is because the ...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1857.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 376.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93882978723 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56166452003 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.481382978723 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 594.0 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5688922335 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.7368421053 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7894736842 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.10526315789 5.45110844103 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123531075997 0.236089414692 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0454443210672 0.076458572812 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553548143182 0.0737576698707 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0957662277943 0.150856017488 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0733452024072 0.0645574589148 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 32, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... to it. That is why, today people live a easy life, in terms of the health care ...
^
Line 6, column 433, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'possess'
Suggestion: possess
...dom and heavy jobs because they did not possessed the degrees that would allow them to wo...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 89, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...hat their lives are much better than it use to be in the past. This is because the ...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1857.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 376.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93882978723 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56166452003 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.481382978723 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 594.0 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5688922335 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.7368421053 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7894736842 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.10526315789 5.45110844103 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123531075997 0.236089414692 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0454443210672 0.076458572812 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553548143182 0.0737576698707 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0957662277943 0.150856017488 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0733452024072 0.0645574589148 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.