Do you agree or disagree with the following statement At universities and colleges sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support Use specific reasons and examples to support your ans
In this new modern era, education has become one of the main subjects for the society members. The parents, whether they are educated or not, think about their children's best learning and they dream to have an educated and scientist kid. They state that children must study in schools and do not do any additional actions, such as athlete or art. However, many experts claim that this opinion is not true and the students must do any amusing actions according to their studying process. This matter has become a controversial issue, and sometimes involved children to itself. I definitely agree with the experts' opinion and believe that students need to have some other activities. In this essay, I will describe the two main reasons.
The first reason to approve my claim is that all people, specifically children, need to have physical and mental health, and this matter would not occur when they just reading scientific books and do something relate to their education. Experts believe that doing at least 15 hours of athletic actions per week can bring children both physical and mental health. For instance, I have a cousin named Ali, who had had best grade in high school, and was at the hall of fame students in the university. But, he has suffered from depression by the age of ten till now. A famous psychologist recently has suggested him to change his lifestyle and does athlete. This reformation in his lifestyle has thoroughly changed his life and now he has become a healthier person.
In my opinion, not having the same talent in people is another reason to support my allegation. All people cannot be a scientists and maybe they are talented in other fields, for example art and sport. Also, the society does not need just scientists and demands some champions in sport and professional artists. School is the best environment to detect these talents and prepare an opportunity for students to prosper. So, additional classes can help them to reach this goal.
For example, my brother, who has a 2 meter height has not been ever interested in learning physics and mathematics. His degrees in theoretical subjects were two loo in high school, and he could not pass them easily. But, due to his tall height he has a strange capability in sports, specifically basketball and volleyball. Nowadays he plays as a professional player in the NBA and he also is a member of our country's national basketball team.
In conclusion, I think the parents must change their view of having engineer and doctor children and allow them to select their favorite path. If the children continue their interested subject, they should be a successful person and be more profitable both for them and the society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 605, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'experts'' or 'expert's'?
Suggestion: experts'; expert's
... to itself. I definitely agree with the experts opinion and believe that students need ...
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Line 3, column 409, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: had
...nstance, I have a cousin named Ali, who had had best grade in high school, and was at t...
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Line 5, column 162, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'loo' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'loos'.
Suggestion: loos
...egrees in theoretical subjects were two loo in high school, and he could not pass t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, so, at least, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 28.0 13.8261648746 203% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2254.0 1977.66487455 114% => OK
No of words: 460.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6311565067 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63676923239 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 212.727598566 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536956521739 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 677.7 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.6405667744 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.9166666667 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1666666667 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.125 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0901201412592 0.236089414692 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0241688974182 0.076458572812 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0253157875353 0.0737576698707 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0478290780165 0.150856017488 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0352640399532 0.0645574589148 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 86.8835125448 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.5 Out of 30
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