Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support. Use specific reasons and examples to support your

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

A college education is an arduous and sometimes overwhelming process, and it is crucial for students to have an opportunity to relieve the tension that they are continuously under. Personally, I believe that universities should fund sports and social activities in the same way that they do with classes and libraries. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, sports activities can help pupils to maintain their physical and emotional health, which is necessary for successful studies. When young people physically exercise, their blood flow increases as well as the level of oxygen, and so their brains work better. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. When I was a pharmacy school student, my institution did not have a well-equipped gym, and I had to drive far away from the campus to a local gym. I always felt great after a workout, but unfortunately, it was time-consuming and expensive to drive long distance, and for this reason, I could do it only once a week. I believe that if my college had had enough sports equipment, I could have exercised more and would have performed better in a class. Although some people argue that in universities libraries desperately need financial support to purchase a myriad of books, these days students can find all information they need on the Internet.
Secondly, through social activities pupils can gain communication skills that are important for their future careers. Nowadays, the majority of businesses are based on the teamwork, and if an employee can get along with his co-workers, he will be valuable to his employers. For instance, as a pharmacist, I have to constantly interact with pharmacy technicians. I have to train and lead them. Sometimes it is not easy. However, when I was a student, my classmates and I took part in a variety of social projects, and so we learned how to effectively communicate with each other, and how to help each other out. As a result, my employers have often praised me for the ability to maintain a positive environment in my pharmacy.
To conclude, I strongly believe that colleges should equally support sports, social activities, classes, and libraries. This is because it will help students with their academic performance, and will help them to excel in life.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, i feel, as a result, as well as, first of all, in the same way

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1946.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 391.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97698209719 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96193276463 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549872122762 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 608.4 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 10.0 1.86738351254 536% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8157822321 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.421052632 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5789473684 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78947368421 5.45110844103 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157188276304 0.236089414692 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0464992643584 0.076458572812 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598639065852 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100003464805 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0252159835327 0.0645574589148 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 86.8835125448 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.002688172 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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