Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
No one in their right mind can deny the importance of developing social skill in this age but is it as significant as traditional education? many people believe so and I am also an advocate of this idea and I strongly believe that universities have an obligation to nurture social skill as much as scientific skills and therefore should devote the same amount of money to it. In this essay, I'm going to explain my reasons for this conclusion.
To begin with, almost every job consists of some interaction between individuals and these simple interactions can change our lives for better or worst. your salary and job position do not solely depend on your workload rather its based on how you represent your self to the world. for example when I graduate from the college and start to looking for works I had a really hard time because I could not represent who I was and it took me a while till figure out how to speak during the interview and all of this drama could have been avoided if I learned proper social skill back in college.
Furthermore, more funds for developing social ability can also ease learning science skills as these plans usually involve students gathering.
these students gathering can aid students to create bonds with each other and maybe, later on, help each other with studies by group readings.
the analysis shows that group reading can facilitate the learning process up to 25 percent and from my experience, it sounds to be true.
in summery, I believe that social education overlooked by universities and they should put much more value to it by increasing its fonds.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, may, really, so, therefore, while, for example, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 15.1003584229 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1333.0 1977.66487455 67% => OK
No of words: 279.0 407.700716846 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77777777778 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5779555877 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634408602151 0.524837075471 121% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 618.680645161 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.6066034308 48.9658058833 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.3 100.406767564 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.9 20.6045352989 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 5.45110844103 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106688980695 0.236089414692 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0418087441721 0.076458572812 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0301117456849 0.0737576698707 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0469272774885 0.150856017488 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.029915718397 0.0645574589148 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.1575268817 124% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 86.8835125448 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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