Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is better to have broad knowledge of many academic subjects than to specialize in one specific subject.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In the past, there was a limited source of knowledge and specific fields to study but as people became more literate and sophisticated, everything changed. Today with the rapid growth of science, many fields become interconnected and very complex with multiple sciences fields attached to each other. This complexity brings this question to mind of many students,
should I pursue a specific academic subject or acquire broad knowledge in multiple fields? in this essay on going to explain why in my opinion broad knowledge is a better deal in order to secure your future.
To begin with, having a broad knowledge of many academic subjects increase the chance of employment enormously for u have a wider choice. for instance, when I started programming I could only work as a web developer. I had a sufficient knowledge on web developing and nothing else and as a result when my employee no longer needed a web developer I got fired but my friend who worked for the same company and had experience on other topics stayed.
Furthermore, when u are skilled in more than one field u can always switch your job when u feel stuck and bored. many people have a depression in their life simply because they doing the same thing over and over again for long period of time or because they don't like what they doing and can't change their job for that's the only thing they can do. for example, my aunt committed suicide when she was in her thirties. Fortunately, she survived and after a couple of session with her therapist, she decided to switch to another job on a topic she pursued as hoppy and ever since she lives a meaningful life.
In summary, I believe having broad knowledge in multiple topics is much more beneficial than being master of one as it raises the likelihood of your employment and enables u to switch your job readily.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, so, for example, for instance, in summary, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1520.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 322.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72049689441 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59742463104 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555900621118 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.7630820824 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.666666667 100.406767564 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8333333333 20.6045352989 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.83333333333 5.45110844103 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22750837035 0.236089414692 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0842878500632 0.076458572812 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0770098196125 0.0737576698707 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135351242835 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0588830555733 0.0645574589148 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 11.7677419355 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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