Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
it is not a secret to anyone that life is tough and as result, there would be times when u are down and need someone to share your feeling with. that's when friends come to the picture. they play a big role in our life and therefore it is not surprising that there are so many controversies around them. one these controversy is about whether we should spend our leisure time with our old friends or meeting new people in order to expand our circle of friends. i personally prefer the former option and in this short essay, I'm going to explain my reasons.
to begin with, meeting new people in order to find a new friend is waste of time when u already have great friends whom you can spend your time with. why should u go through a lot of boring conversation with random strangers instead of doing your favorite hobby with your old friends who you are comfortable with and know u better than anyone else?
furthermore, friendship is like a flower which needs care and constant attention. the more u put effort into your relationship with your friends the stronger your bonds become also like the flower if u don't give enough support to cultivate it, in time it became weaker and weaker till completely die. I remember back when I was in my twentieth I had great friends whom I lost in past years just because I was busy with my life and I greatly regrate it.
in conclusion, good friends are hard to find and harder to keep that is why we should value every moment we have with them instead of trying to find what we already have.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, therefore, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1253.0 1977.66487455 63% => OK
No of words: 285.0 407.700716846 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.39649122807 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32588442985 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575438596491 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 382.5 618.680645161 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.716385712 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.909090909 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9090909091 20.6045352989 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.45110844103 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.5376344086 289% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259502481496 0.236089414692 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0880210768822 0.076458572812 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0852108631236 0.0737576698707 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151154341019 0.150856017488 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0906113232081 0.0645574589148 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 58.1214874552 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.54 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 86.8835125448 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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