Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In contemporary society, as more and more people regard education as a crucial part of life, budges of universities and colleges for classes and libraries rise to a popular topic. Most people contend that universities should spend more on classes in order to furnish high-quality education and attract more students, whereas some people hold that universities and colleges are supposed to attach the significance to sports and social activities so that they are able to cultivate more versatile students. From my perspective, sports and social activities are essential for young adults, and should receive the same financial support as classes and libraries.
First and foremost, sports and social activities ensure students to study with high efficiency. Since studying for a long time will result in weariness, it makes students work at a low efficiency and make mistakes easily. However, if they participate in some activities during their free time instead of keeping studying, they will be relaxed and more comfortable. Playing sports can not only help release the pressure, but also prevent students from illness. As we can imagine, if a student is very weak and easily gets cold, he is unable to concentrate on his schoolwork when he is sick, and he will certainly lag behind on his self- development. To illustrate, my neighbor’s son is 20 years old, and he is studying in a famous university. But during his first semester, he often got sick due to the lack of exercise. Also, since he always stayed up late to study, he had problems with his neck and he needed to stay at home for an entire year for treatment. These problems wasted his time and led to bad grades. Hence, being involved in some activities can help students to study better and it is beneficial for universities to offer enough financial support.
In addition, social activities and sports can foster the capacities of students which they cannot gain in classes. Sports and social activities require a lot of teamwork, but in classes, students cannot learn about the importance of cooperation because there are not too many opportunities for them to exchange ideas with each other and cooperate to complete works. For example, when they play basketball, they should pass the ball to ensure the ball to get into the basket rather than dribbling the ball by oneself. But in classes or libraries, they usually read books alone and finish their essays by themselves. Nonetheless, the spirit of cooperation is vital for everyone in his future career. Therefore, sports and social activities matter a lot for students’ further development and universities should support them.
Last but not least, taking part in sports and activities enables students to make new friends. If a student stay in classrooms or libraries all the time, he can only have friends that he meets in classes or libraries. On the contrary, if he participates in sports or other activities in his free time, he is able to find people who share the same interests as him on sports or other activities. Then, he is able to communicate with more people, and make more friend. Making more good friends is a good opportunity to learn from others. That’s why students are supposed to be involved in more activities and schools should furnish financial support for them.
In a nutshell, sports and social activities is the base of students’ bright future; thus, colleges and universities should not only focus on classes because activities require the equal financial support.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'nonetheless', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'thus', 'whereas', 'for example', 'in addition', 'on the contrary']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.233333333333 0.229887763892 101% => OK
Verbs: 0.142424242424 0.158761421928 90% => OK
Adjectives: 0.104545454545 0.0866891130778 121% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0454545454545 0.046263068375 98% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0606060606061 0.0685040099705 88% => OK
Prepositions: 0.119696969697 0.118717715034 101% => OK
Participles: 0.0212121212121 0.0351676179071 60% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.8561662948 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0348484848485 0.0309702414327 113% => OK
Particles: 0.00151515151515 0.00188951952338 80% => OK
Determiners: 0.0515151515152 0.0887237588012 58% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0242424242424 0.0209618222197 116% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00757575757576 0.0139019557991 54% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3541.0 2387.08602151 148% => OK
No of words: 582.0 408.028673835 143% => OK
Chars per words: 6.08419243986 5.86048508987 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.91168771031 4.48200974243 110% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.386597938144 0.338922669872 114% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.274914089347 0.251872472559 109% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.201030927835 0.174417080927 115% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.142611683849 0.112833075102 126% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8561662948 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 275.0 212.727598566 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.472508591065 0.524397521467 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 57.1884526322 59.2087087015 97% => OK
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6684587814 126% => OK
Sentence length: 22.3846153846 20.5533526081 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.5084400558 48.84282405 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.192307692 120.699889404 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3846153846 20.5533526081 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.576923076923 0.644075263715 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.54480286738 72% => OK
Readability: 49.8760243193 45.7405998639 109% => OK
Elegance: 1.50609756098 1.45489161554 104% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.436192462462 0.300154397459 145% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.126511339074 0.103427244359 122% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0812237590661 0.0752933317313 108% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.483676770571 0.497263757937 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.168246245121 0.151897553556 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.171059151473 0.114077575197 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12087780061 0.0781384742642 155% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.34786038911 0.336927656856 103% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0337943461537 0.067059652881 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.331098070492 0.210909579961 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0856459833877 0.0618886996521 138% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8870967742 151% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.86379928315 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.91756272401 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 17.0 8.42114695341 202% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.4623655914 203% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 23.0 13.6433691756 169% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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