Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Visiting museums is the best way to learn about a country.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It is generally agreed that obtaining knowledge about other countries can help people to have efficient communication with other foreign people. The government and sometimes people try to present their country as efficiently as possible. One of the ways is through the museum where they gather historical or monumental discovered objects in their country. Some people prefer to visit museums, whereas others learn about other countries by visiting the country or other ways like seminars and so on so forth. Although it is hard to reach a consensus on this issue, I do believe other ways like direct visiting are better than museums and museums are not the best way to learn about a country. I will elaborate on my opinion in the following paragraphs.
To commence, one of the compelling reasons that come to my mind is that we can not find all the cultural aspects of a country in a museum. Let us continue by this fact that a museum normally presents the historical part of a culture. It is crystal clear that you can find just the discovered object that they found in historical sites. For instance, when you visit a museum about Italy, you can not see Roman Forum in it and you have to visit Rome to understand what is exactly. Needless to say, you can not find food, clothes and so on in the museum.
In addition, a significant part of any culture in all countries is their language. Simply stated, if you want to learn about a country you should know or at least be familiar with its language. For instance, the poem has had a big impact on our country throughout history, and many proverbs have been developed based on it. An empirical study conducted in my country reveals that most tourists who visit my country get confused with proverbs that are based on poems. Therefore, in order to prevent any misunderstanding, having basic knowledge is mandatory to learn more about my country.
Last but not least, climate and weather is the best factor that presents a country at the first step. It is crystal clear that we can not find it in museums and we have to visit the country and feel the weather. Canada is cold during winter and its weather can not be presented by some pictures in a museum. You must go there and feel that hell of winter. My friends always recommended me that visit that Havana. I remember that when I visited Havana, I could not even breathe because of the humidity in the city. I was shocked on the first day in Havana.
In summary, all these are taken into account, although museums present useful information about a country, I do believe that people can not properly learn about a country by just visiting museums. It can not give them useful information about food, language, and weather which are the most important factors to learn about a country.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 459, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[1]
Message: The adverb 'Always' is usually not used at the beginning of a sentence.
...e because of the humidity in that city. Always my friend recommended me that visit tha...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, therefore, whereas, at least, for instance, in addition, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.0286738351 190% => OK
Pronoun: 62.0 43.0788530466 144% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 70.0 52.1666666667 134% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2301.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 494.0 407.700716846 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65789473684 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71445763274 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55075589182 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.463562753036 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 720.9 618.680645161 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4124979662 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.04 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.76 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.48 5.45110844103 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326522301547 0.236089414692 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.086293740291 0.076458572812 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0628884837717 0.0737576698707 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182963455944 0.150856017488 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478597085147 0.0645574589148 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 459, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[1]
Message: The adverb 'Always' is usually not used at the beginning of a sentence.
...e because of the humidity in that city. Always my friend recommended me that visit tha...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, therefore, whereas, at least, for instance, in addition, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.0286738351 190% => OK
Pronoun: 62.0 43.0788530466 144% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 70.0 52.1666666667 134% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2301.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 494.0 407.700716846 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65789473684 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71445763274 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55075589182 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.463562753036 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 720.9 618.680645161 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4124979662 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.04 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.76 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.48 5.45110844103 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326522301547 0.236089414692 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.086293740291 0.076458572812 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0628884837717 0.0737576698707 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182963455944 0.150856017488 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478597085147 0.0645574589148 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.