Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Watching television is bad for children. Use specific details and examples to support your answer.
Considering watching television as a bad thing for children, I am strongly inclined to take the opposite direction of this statement. Being one of most proliferated psychological subjects for children growth, the main advantages of the television for children cannot be neglected. To elaborate more on topic mentioned, the following reasons and examples will be presented.
First and foremost, watching television can be ascribed as an anodyne for their irritable behaviors. It is undeniable that there is a causal relationship between the surprising potential of interesting television's programs on the one hand, and their effective impact to prevent the incidence of possible abnormality in children behavior on the other hand. For example, the novel cartoon programs attract children in an exceptional situation which they spend remarkable time to watch them without any additional activity.
Another primary reasons can be attributed to the crucial and complementary role of television to enhance the basic information of children in different disciplines. For instance, there are numerous programs which try to introduce children with the new technology, new lands, worth visiting places, etc. Besides, some movies encourage children to learn a new language that can be denoted as an extraordinary advantage of television.
Aside from the points I made above, the positive educational aspect of television for systematic children upbringing should not be neglected.
As the current anthropology findings reveal, in addition to the attractive features of television's programs for all children, there are plenty of useful programs which teach the parents how treat children influentially. It goes without saying that the parents get to watch these program in conjunction with their children to make an essential family bond.
Taking all of these perspectives into account, I cannot disagree more about the negative effects of watching television for children regarding the associated benefits of television to prevent the harmful behaviors, enhance the basic information of children and systematic children upbringing. To my best knowledge, however, watching television for a long time can be indicated as a disadvantage, the fundamental role of parent to control this harmful behavior can prevent the consequential disorders.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, however, if, regarding, so, for example, for instance, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1995.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 348.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.73275862069 4.8611393121 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15936612822 2.67179642975 118% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551724137931 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 625.5 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.51630824373 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.7077377105 48.9658058833 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.5 100.406767564 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8571428571 20.6045352989 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57142857143 5.45110844103 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266101640229 0.236089414692 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101984211977 0.076458572812 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490579711093 0.0737576698707 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146595563078 0.150856017488 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.051225636825 0.0645574589148 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 11.7677419355 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 58.1214874552 52% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.10430107527 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.1575268817 148% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.25 10.9000537634 149% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.01818996416 121% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 86.8835125448 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.002688172 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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