Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
From a general point of view, in today's sophisticated era we observe, in which affording the costs of life is a challenge for most of the society members, it comes as no surprise that owning a good job can play a vital role to fulfill people’s demands. However, working under which situations is more favorable for people has been a rather controversial issue among many individuals. There are many who believe that workers like to do various tasks in their daily jobs rather than doing similar duties entire a day. I to contrary, repudiate this idea. In what follows I shall elaborate more on this notion by focusing on two reasons.
The first imperative reason is that by doing same tasks everyday we can become expert in those tasks because of the huge amount of time which we spend on them. It is needless to say that by doing a repetitive activity people will get so skilled on it that they maybe could do it even with closed eyes! As a result, they would be more successful on the field. Take a successful football player like Cristiano Ronaldo as an example, and let's imagine that instead of playing as a forward, he played at the same time in a defensive position and in a attacking position. Never could he score such a huge number of goals every season and won the European Golden Ball prize which is given to the top scorer player in the Europe.
Another notable reason which deserves some words here is that doing similar daily duties needs less concentration and leads to getting less stressed out. It goes without saying that our mind get less involved with activities which we do regularly everyday such as eating, walking, brushing teeth, etc. Doing our daily job tasks can goes with the same story only if we do routine and invariable duties in our professions. For further illustration, a recent yet well-regarded study conducted at University of Gothenburg can be pointed out. The researchers found out that 85% of people who have jobs with unchangeable duties are already sure about what they want to do every day without any mind tension and stress; these people benefit from more relaxed and pleasant lives. This provides additional corroboration for the idea that people with various job tasks experience more stressful lives.
To sum everything up, we can logically reach this conclusion that doing identical tasks in a workday is more satisfactory since we can become more expert in our duties and get less stressed. Thus, it is highly recommended that people avoid from trying multiple tasks in their jobs.
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...to the top scorer player in the Europe. Another notable reason which deserves so...
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...d with activities which we do regularly everyday such as eating, walking, brushing teeth...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, so, then, thus, well, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2109.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 438.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81506849315 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57476223824 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59664932702 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554794520548 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 660.6 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.7345276047 48.9658058833 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.058823529 100.406767564 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7647058824 20.6045352989 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.94117647059 5.45110844103 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24554794128 0.236089414692 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0811727880733 0.076458572812 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0764187122965 0.0737576698707 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153853451544 0.150856017488 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0216665265561 0.0645574589148 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
automated_readability_index: 14.2 11.7677419355 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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