Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their communities. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
I think these days most of youth are not giving enough time to help their communities because of different reasons. In the following I will briefly explain few of these reasons which prevent young people to help their communities.
First reason in my belief is shortage of time. Nowadays, people are overwhelmed with lots of thing to do varying from educational issues to economical and occupational maters. I, myself, am too busy that I always am struggling to free up some time in my schedule and even do not have enough time to have some fun and rest. This fact can of course prevent people to paying attention to helping others.
Lack of information can be another reason. With the popularity of television programs and movies and similar media between people causes people to only get informed about what they are mostly watching. Since the programs are mostly produced to entertain people they avoid to broadcast negative aspects. As a result, people and especially youngsters are not always aware of the need of various communities and do not even think about helping them.
Furthermore, paying less attention to the needs of others and concerning less about them can be proposed as the third reason. Nowadays, because of people's occupation and also their tendency toward having more fun, young people are getting less and less concerned about the other people and they are somehow getting selfish. This in turn causes them not to aid communities.
These were a few pointes that I was able to explain about the reasons of the decreasing tendency to help communities.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: lots of things
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Suggestion: am always
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Message: Did you mean 'am I'?
Suggestion: am I
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Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ed about what they are mostly watching. Since the programs are mostly produced to ent...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, first, furthermore, if, so, third, i think, of course, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1320.0 1977.66487455 67% => OK
No of words: 265.0 407.700716846 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98113207547 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59498105278 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 212.727598566 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535849056604 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 618.680645161 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6149665381 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.2857142857 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9285714286 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.78571428571 5.45110844103 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266120895728 0.236089414692 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0910262815689 0.076458572812 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05233357131 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149364548775 0.150856017488 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0650612547999 0.0645574589148 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 86.8835125448 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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