Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Young people today have no influence on the important decisions that determine the future of society as a whole. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
With the development of modern society, youngsters become more significant. Some argues that young people today have no influence on the important decisions that determine the future of society while others hold the contrary. From my perspective, young people playing a significant role in the determination of our society. The reasons are as below.
Firstly, in the contemporary society, youngsters can catch on the transformation and development of every aspects of our society in an unprecedented speed. Thanks to the passion mind, young people are always willing to learn the new thing independently, which let them understand the changes and get to familiar with it as quickly as possible. while confronted with obstacle, youngsters are more likely to solve it cause their energetic body and healthy mentality, comparing to elder.
Furthermore, there are so many facts that young people has impacted important influences on the management of society. A survey conducted by experts from Peking university shows that over 76 percent of countries’ political department has consisted of nearly 30% of people whose age between 20 and 30. These young congressmen have devoted their diligence and intelligence to solve several social problems, such as juvenile delinquency, political scandals, work strikes, ups and downs of stock market exchange. Consequently, the whole society has gradually changed.
Admittedly, we cannot deny that the elder can consider more thorough than youth, since they have experienced numerous of problems and studied longer time. Most of the policies and decisions are made by aged and skillful manager, and the accumulation of practice experience is unlikely to be obtained by youngsters in a short time. But is this means that young people have no influences on making decision? Apparently, according to recent news, we can surprisingly see that the increasing number of efficient solution are created by plenty of youth. many policies have absorbed the advice from students, which from primary school to college.
In a nutshell, as the outstanding performance reveals, the young people nowadays have their own special influence on the important decisions that determine the future of society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1904.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 344.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53488372093 4.8611393121 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01043794395 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587209302326 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 585.9 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9696972191 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2352941176 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.82352941176 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274777932917 0.236089414692 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0925080723554 0.076458572812 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0986528872334 0.0737576698707 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168403127626 0.150856017488 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.090190520096 0.0645574589148 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 11.7677419355 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 10.9000537634 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 86.8835125448 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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