Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A zoo has no useful purpose. Use specific reasons and examples to explain your answer.
Every country establish the zoo for various purpose and it is valuable.Zoo play substantial role in our life. In the zoo all sort of the wild animal, birds, reptile etc are available and people enjoy the visiting on the zoo. Some people think that zoo has no value in our life. while, other people penchant that zoo has more useful purpose. From my vantage point, I disagree to author statement that zoo has no useful purpose because of zoo is best place for entertainment, people can see the animal life and rare species of birds and wild animal, and help to preserve the some rare species and protect from the extinction.
To begin with, most kids are enjoying to visiting the zoo and it is help to the children to understand the animal life. Variety of the animals, birds, reptiles are not see in the routine life. For example, my younger brother last time went to zoo and he first time see the alligator, He is very curious to see the alligator because of alligator not we are see on the local place and its present in the rare place which is not possible that kids are see them. Besides, people are also enjoying with natural birds and animal. I also visit the zoo couple of time in the years, that place i feel more peaceful environment and chirping birds make me more ecstatic.
Furthermore, in the zoo many types of animals are preserve and caring by the member of zoo. A lots animal must have to need the protection from the extinction and the zoo is important role for caring and breeding the some species. For instance, the american most famous passenger pigeon was need to protection form the hunting and extinction.If, the zoo preserve the male passenger pigeon then, the female pigeon could breed but it not happen because of no male found for the breed cause the extinction of the passenger pigeon. Therefore, zoo is important for the animal life.
In brief,contemplating aforemention reasons zoo is one kind of entertainment and kids can get the knowledge about the animal life, people have also enjoying the zoo and it should require for protect the some animal species to extinction. Therefore, I refute the writer statement that a zoo has no useful purpose.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, if, so, then, therefore, while, for example, for instance, i feel, in brief, kind of, sort of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1804.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 384.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69791666667 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57592498725 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.432291666667 0.524837075471 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 579.6 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 83.1676582272 48.9658058833 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.75 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 5.45110844103 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171951721966 0.236089414692 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0794667827902 0.076458572812 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0778667860822 0.0737576698707 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122105384233 0.150856017488 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0660701559404 0.0645574589148 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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