Do you agree or disagree with following statement?
A person should never make an important decision alone.
In the modern society, the people are in the challenge of the making crucial decision. While some people are convinced to make the important decision lonely; others, on the other hand, believe otherwise. I personally agree with the first belief. In the following paragraphs, I will delve into the most outstanding reasons which persuade me to put forward this perspective.
The first reason which advocates my outlook is that the responsibility of the issue about which a person makes a decision is entirely up to him. In fact, there is no matter who says what; the outcome will be related to that person. In this situation, it is lucidly obvious that if the decision made by the other person and faces the error, she or he will not accept that his or her advice leads to this failure. However, the responsible person who asked to make the decision is blamed for his careless. A vivid example can be given to shed light on the subject is my instance. I am an architect, and I work in an office. In one project, I was the responsible for the interior design, and I had to render the final design. Even though I was eager not to use particular motifs in the design, my coworker attempted to convince me that that motif would be appropriate for my design. As a result, I altered my design, and it did not be accepted by my head designer. Moreover, he blamed me for my bad scheme.
The second factor which shapes my idea is that no one’s perspective is not as in-depth as the primary person's angle. Indeed, the individual who is in the currents of the events is more aware that what are causes and results. Based on this chasm understanding, the seeking for the decent option will be comfortable for that person. According to the noteworthy, intelligence survey conducted in my country, approximately sixty-five percent of the individuals in the critical conditions, are able to address the problem in the half-fold quicker than others who do not encounter that atmosphere. This static cogently explicates that the most practical decision is made by the individual who faces the situation for the sake of his prolific perspective from the condition.
Nevertheless, some people may assume that the integration of the various advice can be accountable for the situation in the best case. However, they overlook this subtle point that the time management is crucial, and the arrangement of the different ideas in the short span is an arduous task. As a matter of fact, each person surmises that his advice is the best option, if an individual is inclined to make a decision based on the different information, it seems impossible for that person to address his problem in the adequate time given. Hence, the efficacy of the comprehensive advice is meaningless.
To wrap it up, based on the aforementioned reasons, one can logically draw the conclusion that the important decision should be made by the sole person; since he is the chief responsible, he has the deep outlooks from the condition, and the best option in the sufficient time is rendered lonely by one person. All in all, I firmly recommend that the crucial decision should be made by the one person.
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...ision should be made by the one person.
Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'moreover', 'nevertheless', 'second', 'so', 'while', 'in fact', 'as a matter of fact', 'as a result', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.193126022913 0.229887763892 84% => OK
Verbs: 0.152209492635 0.158761421928 96% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0932896890344 0.0866891130778 108% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0425531914894 0.046263068375 92% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0621931260229 0.0685040099705 91% => OK
Prepositions: 0.121112929624 0.118717715034 102% => OK
Participles: 0.0310965630115 0.0351676179071 88% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.81366315799 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0245499181669 0.0309702414327 79% => OK
Particles: 0.00163666121113 0.00188951952338 87% => OK
Determiners: 0.148936170213 0.0887237588012 168% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0180032733224 0.0209618222197 86% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0180032733224 0.0139019557991 130% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3172.0 2387.08602151 133% => OK
No of words: 547.0 408.028673835 134% => OK
Chars per words: 5.79890310786 5.86048508987 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.83611736076 4.48200974243 108% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.341864716636 0.338922669872 101% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.261425959781 0.251872472559 104% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.184643510055 0.174417080927 106% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.120658135283 0.112833075102 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81366315799 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 258.0 212.727598566 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.471663619744 0.524397521467 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 55.9828199612 59.2087087015 95% => OK
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6684587814 121% => OK
Sentence length: 21.88 20.5533526081 106% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.6657813275 48.84282405 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.88 120.699889404 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.88 20.5533526081 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.6 0.644075263715 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 48.0225959781 45.7405998639 105% => OK
Elegance: 1.34394904459 1.45489161554 92% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0698114077708 0.300154397459 23% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.136082913359 0.103427244359 132% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0839157835336 0.0752933317313 111% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.57898932913 0.497263757937 116% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.1796905243 0.151897553556 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0374677914921 0.114077575197 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0393231431699 0.0781384742642 50% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.575287022536 0.336927656856 171% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0971325474045 0.067059652881 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0574081065942 0.210909579961 27% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0234514858574 0.0618886996521 38% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8870967742 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.86379928315 207% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.91756272401 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 8.42114695341 119% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.75985663082 145% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.6433691756 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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