Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
According to my understanding of, the truth; I strongly agreed in always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.
The truth is more than a word, the truth is trust, love and a reason for living. Truth is one of the philosophical prospects that consumed the philosopher's mind. However, the understanding of the truth is relative according to each one believes; it could be a reason for happiness or sadness. The effect of confessing or masking the truth is so great; in this essay we are going to study this effect under a specific example.
To begin with, the truth in the relationship which is so confusing one; some people think that saying the truth, whatever it will hurt or not is necessary; while, the other saying it doesn't matter to tell the truth as much it won't hurt. As an example, the doctor will see from the career ethics to say the truth for the patient if he had a serious disease that might be killing him such as a brain tumor; however, the patient, family would prefer not to tell him in order to keep him happy during the rest of his life days.
An equally significant aspect of telling the truth: in the human relationships, such as friendship, when two friends, the first one asking the second one her opinion about a new boyfriend, she got and she told her that he is not a proper for her, that might break the relation between them. But if she compliments her, the relation will go forward, but it will lose its meaning. In such a situation, I think saying the truth is so important, where the first friend will come back after discovering the truth.
The media and advertisement are also, one of the most important prospect; which, will affect on the community awareness. For example, when the TV news is under the political control, all the news must be for the government benefits like covering the news that might raise up the people on the government. Another example of the advertisement, a company could play with the person's consciousness by an advertising saying that its product is perfect for the human using, although it's not a good product.
In last but not least, humans are different each one has his own believes in the life; which, will make the truth a relative aspect according each one point of view. There is no truth; but, there is understanding for, each situation that will make us judge on it. In my consideration the truth is the action that might achieve happiness or sadness but it should happen.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...s necessary; while, the other saying it doesnt matter to tell the truth as much it won...
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... of view. There is no truth; but, there is understanding for, each situation that will make us j...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, while, for example, i think, such as, to begin with, to tell the truth
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2072.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 444.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66666666667 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5903493882 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.663107102 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504504504505 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 613.8 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Interrogative: 3.0 0.994623655914 302% => OK
Article: 14.0 3.08781362007 453% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.8449587573 48.9658058833 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.5 100.406767564 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.75 20.6045352989 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0625 5.45110844103 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18804147251 0.236089414692 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0723988640636 0.076458572812 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0911051773403 0.0737576698707 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130132190369 0.150856017488 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124718743568 0.0645574589148 193% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 58.1214874552 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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