Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship.
Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
Life is an accumulation of relationship. Some people believe that never telling the lie is the crucial element of all relationships. On the other hand, others think exact opposite of it. From my point of view, the pros of always telling the truth outweigh the cons for the following reasons.
Above all, sometimes it is hard to say the truth but the lie will only hurt you, not others. Even though how good you hide the truth, it will always live in your mind which completely feel guilty every moment when you think about it. From my experience, I can prove it. When I was in seventh grade, I went to the park with my friends without a permission of my mother. After the day it happened, I feel like I was the worst person in the world. It hurt me badly and I decided to tell all the truth, after telling it, I understand that the lie cannot hurt other people who do not know but it only hurt the ones who know it.
Furthermore, if you tell someone a lie and the other person know the truth it obviously breaks the relationship because the main pillar of any relationship is belief of people. Two strangers become couple because they rely each other and they divorce because they do not rely each other anymore. For instance, if the husband cheat on his wife, her trust will be destroyed by what her husband done and they would probably divorce because there is nothing would advocate their relationship again.
All in all, telling a lie has a bad impact on a relationship because it breaks the belief of each other. I strongly believe that always telling the truth is vital for the relationship to last long.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, so, for instance, i feel, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 52.1666666667 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1327.0 1977.66487455 67% => OK
No of words: 295.0 407.700716846 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49830508475 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44189235325 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 212.727598566 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518644067797 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 618.680645161 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3007399519 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.4666666667 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180333474021 0.236089414692 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0631906658326 0.076458572812 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558009817969 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117423354526 0.150856017488 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0178618215772 0.0645574589148 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.82 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.83 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 86.8835125448 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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