Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
How to live a life is never an negligible in the hustle and bustle in modern life, where people have different characters have various ideas, style and principles. In reference to such an issue, the ability to plan and organize, in my opinion, should be regarded as important. Three of the main benefits is that it would help us save time, get a sense of accomplishment and make a vivid life.
Off the top of my head the reason is that we can save a lot of time by set a schedule. Some people are used to do something whatever and whenever they want to, just like me several years ago. Nevertheless it turns out incorrect. Because if they do not draw a plan, they will do a lot of things together. As a result, many of them can not finish their word on time. What's more, some time that should be spent to relax and entertain is lost, either. Would you enjoy this kind of life? I probably would not.
In addition, organizing every properly can help us realize our dreams and get a sense of accomplishment. You will have the capability to finish many things seemingly impossible. Take myself as an example. When I was in college, I worked as the leader in the student union while having a lot of tests to take. Due to the good habit of organizing, I finished all the stuff very well and become the merit student in my college. Many classmates asked me the secret to success, and I think you would probably know the answer.
Last, just as the two points I mentioned before, making a plan can
In a nutshell, everyone in the modern life ought to develop the capability to draw a plan and organize everything well, which will enable you a promising future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Nevertheless,
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Suggestion: What's
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, nevertheless, so, well, while, i think, in addition, kind of, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1358.0 1977.66487455 69% => OK
No of words: 306.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.43790849673 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54662196606 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581699346405 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.5934085624 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.4444444444 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11111111111 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199481049886 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0498378318341 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530059719971 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101968824344 0.150856017488 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476244997872 0.0645574589148 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 11.7677419355 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 10.9000537634 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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