It is more important for universities to invest in infrastructure and physical plant than to invest in keeping the faculty satisfied.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Everyone can depict his own perfect university in his mind. In some students' view, a good university means countless masters. Others may think that having a beautiful campus scenery is the most significant point. As for me, the satisfaction of all the students and teachers, even every worker in the university is the first priority to a university. Therefore. universities should invest more in keeping the faculty satisfied.
First off, whether a university is top or not does not depend on the infrastructure and physical plant of it. Take many universities in my countries as examples. The tops universities, which are the dream schools of thousands of high school students, and the facilities of which sometimes can not compare with some common universities which are easily admitted in. So, the main distinction between top universities and common universities does not lies in it.
In addition, the final ambition of one's life is being satisfied with himself. So are universities'. Only the universities which every stuff is content with are excellent universities. My friends Sam now study in a very rich university with many tall buildings and advanced facilities. However, he still regret being a member of it. As he told to me, even though school equipped the library with Apple PCs, there was almost no electricity everyday. What makes him more angry is
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, so, still, therefore, as for, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 43.0788530466 32% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 52.1666666667 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1148.0 1977.66487455 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 223.0 407.700716846 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14798206278 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 4.48103885553 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99341377881 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 212.727598566 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618834080717 0.524837075471 118% => OK
syllable_count: 365.4 618.680645161 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.1074239546 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.75 100.406767564 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9375 20.6045352989 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.125 5.45110844103 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165023374125 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0599824233918 0.076458572812 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100277760893 0.0737576698707 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108595600901 0.150856017488 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0604341201294 0.0645574589148 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 58.1214874552 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 86.8835125448 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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