Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
Off the top of my head the reason is that we can save a lot of time and reach our goals directly with a delicate arrangement. My trip with my boyfriend to Shanghai City is a good demonstration for that. Before we started, we drew a traveling plan including which places of interest we would visit, what delicious food we looked forward to tasting and much more details. It turned out that we made a wise decision in that every day we spent there was joyful and almost not a minute was wasted.
In addition, the capability of organization provides us with a remedy when we are stuck in a great number of affairs at the same time. Accordingly, we can realize our dreams and get a sense of accomplishment. My idol is Stella McCartney, one of the most well-known women designers. She not only has her own brand, but is a mother of four children. Once she was interviewed about the secret to success, her answer was to organize and design your life and she pointed out that in such a complex world, no one can get all things well without plan.
So, would I be able to stand to defend myself when someone points out that he would feel a sense of restriction with so many plans and want to live an enjoyable life. While I will say that only when you endeavor to make all you want come true, can you feel pleased from the deepest part of your heart. Life without plan would not bring you the real freedom, but the excuse of laziness.
In a nutshell, the complexity of society nowadays is overall an undeniable trend and the trend is only going to continue. The ability to plan and organize will enable you to adapt it and bring you a promising future.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, if, look, so, well, while, as to, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1348.0 1977.66487455 68% => OK
No of words: 307.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.39087947883 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47949286311 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586319218241 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 618.680645161 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4138818392 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2857142857 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9285714286 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131959904779 0.236089414692 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0460839868077 0.076458572812 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0446580846441 0.0737576698707 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0850729437147 0.150856017488 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385306601573 0.0645574589148 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 10.9000537634 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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