Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
Throughout history people have tended to know about the future and predict it but this is impossible for human so they found a way to can adopt themselves and get ready for everything that will happen in the later days.Some people may hold the view that planing and organizing for the next time is not necessary for youngsters.However, some others may take an opposite viewpoint and believe that having the ability to plan and know what to do in this modern life is essential to have a better life.I personally contend that the former idea is more rational. In the following paragraphs I will elaborate my viewpoint through three noticeable reasons.
the first exquisite point to be mentioned is that nowadays people are so busy and have a lot of works to do and it is hard to manage their time during a day. for example my sister is a clerk and she has 2 children that they need cares and it is important for her to do her career's duty and take care of her children they all of their demands are imperative so doing all these works respectively and she should have plan to take time.
Another reason which deserves some words here is that young people have many goals in their mind and they will try to achieve them and with a useful planing it will be feasible and their successful trace back to their capability of managing the time. for instance, Brayan Tresi is the author of the book of goals and he say in this book that if people write everything of their mind on the paper it will hep them to know what should they do for getting closer to that and what inessential thing they should remove and improve their power to enhance their energy for their goals.
The third reason is that in this complex world that is full of entertainments and things that distract people having plan has very advantages to be in the right lines. according to the last surveys that have been done by psychologists. determined that people who had an plan and exactly knew that what they want to do were more successful and more happy rather than a person with no outlook of the future. a person with plan definitely know when should wake up and when is the time to go to bed and when go to the cinema and when study. Furthermore, this person will enjoy from every moment of his life because he is relax and not worry about his works.
In conclusion, based on what was mentioned before, young b people who has goals and want to be a high level person in their country should have the ability of plan and writing their works to do them on time and be enthusiast for every day that is coming.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, look, may, so, third, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 28.0 13.8261648746 203% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 23.0 11.0286738351 209% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 62.0 43.0788530466 144% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2104.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 476.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.42016806723 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67091256922 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39245778387 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.464285714286 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 657.0 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 20.1344086022 194% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 128.656816333 48.9658058833 263% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 175.333333333 100.406767564 175% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.6666666667 20.6045352989 193% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.83333333333 5.45110844103 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.5376344086 289% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267890590605 0.236089414692 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0956572642305 0.076458572812 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556497183979 0.0737576698707 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153296667404 0.150856017488 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476372960391 0.0645574589148 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 11.7677419355 163% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 58.1214874552 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.1 10.1575268817 159% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.95 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 58.0 10.002688172 580% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.0537634409 175% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.