Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In the modern era, the increasing-pace of technological advancements plays a pivotal role in the human beings' lives. A controversial question which is often raised regarding this issue is whether all of these developments are in line with the satisfaction of people or these changes' pace have an annoying effect on humans. Some people possess the conviction that overall, the changings have a positive influence on our lives whereas others hold exactly the opposite and allege that the unlimited pace of changings leads to some troubles and people are less happy and satisfied with their lives. I personally contend that although these changes occasionally might be inappropriate and have some side effects, broad speaking, they have manifold desirable effects on our lives. The following paragraphs represent a cursory glance at the most outstanding reasons.
The first reason coming to mind to elucidate my standpoint is concerned with this issue that from the scientists’ point of view, all these changes are according to the requirements of human beings. In fact, these changes are in a way that appeal consumers and upgrade the level of their lives. To shed light on this issue, consider one of the most popular electronic devices, cell phones. Cell phones have a paramount importance and considerably affected our lives. At first, they provided the possibility of having a call. after that, they added the ability of messaging. nowadays, we can connect to the internet, surf internet, access to a host of useful applications and so on. Therefore, cell phones, a tiny thing which is in our trousers' pocket, provide unprecedented facilities for us.
The second rationale behind this opinion is rooted in the fact that development of technology brings up more convenient life for us. For example, in the summer which the temperature is high, we can stay at home and the air conditioner maintain the temperature in the pleasant degree which we prefer. If we want to go out, we use our car cooler. In the past, it was not a case. As another example, assume the internet. By using the internet, we have access to infinite resources for reading and learning. In the past, we have to go to the libraries to find books and magazines. But now, we can stay at home and just search the name of that book or article. In a blink of eye that book is available for us. Had we did not have access to the internet, it would not be feasible for us to have all things at our home.
In conclusion, contemplating all the aforementioned reasons, one soon realizes that not only these changes are not annoying, but also they are absolutely beneficial and people are delighted with these changing and their speed.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 28, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'mind elucidating'.
Suggestion: mind elucidating
... reasons. The first reason coming to mind to elucidate my standpoint is concerned with this is...
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Line 3, column 530, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: After
...vided the possibility of having a call. after that, they added the ability of messagi...
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Line 3, column 579, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Nowadays
...t, they added the ability of messaging. nowadays, we can connect to the internet, surf i...
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Line 5, column 713, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[4]
Message: Possible agreement error – use past participle here: 'done'.
Suggestion: done
...e that book is available for us. Had we did not have access to the internet, it wou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, regarding, second, so, therefore, whereas, for example, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2255.0 1977.66487455 114% => OK
No of words: 456.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9451754386 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62105577807 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87062576224 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532894736842 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 714.6 618.680645161 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.461151174 48.9658058833 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.9583333333 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16666666667 5.45110844103 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144526086549 0.236089414692 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0357863028386 0.076458572812 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533988514249 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0974474985898 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519016918793 0.0645574589148 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 86.8835125448 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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