Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

People may debate this argument.it is not easy agree or disagree with this statement without considering good reason for this choice. Many people claims that the change so rapidly is the cause of more sad now people than they was in the past. I,personally agree with this statement saying that the people now days are more sadness and have more personal unsatisfacion than the people in the past. My decision is based in a couple of reasons.

First of all ,socially speaking people today are not instructed in values. Now days they consider stuff like that outdated. They have different patron to do things that they just consider right. A compelling example of this is my sister when she was young. She mention to me she always said hello to the people in the morning, because my parents teached that to her.She was very proud of that .

Secondly,analyzing the economy years ago was better than now People in this country develop the actual economy, However, people now get bored in theirs job they have nothing new to add. For example when my mother was a working for a company with the same expectation for a few years. Was no payment an also they have no new resources to offer to the workers. So she decide live was not happy.

Finally people become more dependents of computers and phone. Everyday life are stressed out for all the technology.Another example is myself I was trying to completed an assessment on the computer. The computer was block and I can't complete anything.

In summation this is how people from the past was less sad than now. Therefore I consider all the points above

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1330.0 1977.66487455 67% => OK
No of words: 280.0 407.700716846 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61137713397 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 212.727598566 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546428571429 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 618.680645161 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.0603192044 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.8888888889 100.406767564 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5555555556 20.6045352989 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.44444444444 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 5.5376344086 488% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25357902113 0.236089414692 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0762424758999 0.076458572812 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0767403397194 0.0737576698707 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141793436974 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0821292557434 0.0645574589148 127% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 11.7677419355 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 86.8835125448 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.