do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Education children is more difficult task today than it was in the past because they spend so much time on cellphone, online games and social networking websites.
There is no doubt that education of the children plays the prominent role in their threatment by the parents. No one can blind eye to influence of educational methods and its quallity on children's future life. A heated controversial question is raised related to the issue is whether todey, the education of children is more difficult or in the past? Some people may hold this viewpoint that due to the fact that children spend much more time on something such as cellphone, nowadays, their education is more difficult. Hawever, other look at this concept from the diffrent lens. In my point of view, this belief is strongly erraneous and parent have a easier job for education their childrens today than in the past. In what follows, I will pin point some of outstanding reasons.
One of the most conspicious reason comming mind related to the statement is improving the innovative technologies. Nowadays, there are plenty number of technologies which teachers can employ them to educate their kids. For example, in comparition with the past time, excistance of some technologies such as smart board and tablets pave teachers' way to teach children more and more easily. They can draw the pic, earase it easily, give the homeworks and etc. by such these things. Furthermore, these new technologies bring can encourage children to learn easier and quickly. Take the mathematic class in prime school as an exaple. If teacher utilizes the smart board or smart systems to demonstrate some animal pic to educate the children the concept of summation or other mathematical concepts, children get this concepts quickly. Consequently, nowadays, teaching the kids is easier than in the past.
The other equally reason supporting my idea is that todays, parents aware of the impact of children's education on their future life and career and they try to prepare their kids to education from younger age in order to get the concepts of lessons more quickly in the school. For example, in my country, most of the parents send his kids to English language class from age 3-4 due to the fact that they find that the language ability will be one of the most predominant factors in their children's future lives. An empirical test conducted in west Asia clearly depicts this fact that above 80 percent of students who are succeed in the acceptance exam of prestigious university was sent to the preparation class before their prime school. So, their scientific foundation built more powerful and education of them in the school are more easier. This clarifies this issue that nowadays, awareness of parents brings about the help for kid's education.
From what has been mentioned above, we can safely reach the conclusion that education of children is more convinient and easier today than in the past. It is hard to disguise the pessimistic effect of some technologies on children's educational procedure. Despite of this fact, teaching of kids is easier today due to the above said reasons. All in all, it is anticipated that teacher will have the easier education work for teaching childrens owing to invention of new technologies and new methods.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 652, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...f is strongly erraneous and parent have a easier job for education their children...
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Line 2, column 256, Rule ID: PAST_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
...s. For example, in comparition with the past time, excistance of some technologies such a...
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Line 2, column 449, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...c, earase it easily, give the homeworks and etc. by such these things. Furthermore, thes...
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Line 2, column 808, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...her mathematical concepts, children get this concepts quickly. Consequently, nowaday...
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Line 3, column 612, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
... fact that above 80 percent of students who are succeed in the acceptance exam of prest...
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Line 3, column 620, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'succeeded'.
Suggestion: succeeded
...at above 80 percent of students who are succeed in the acceptance exam of prestigious u...
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Line 3, column 830, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...and education of them in the school are more easier. This clarifies this issue that nowaday...
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Discourse Markers used:
['consequently', 'furthermore', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'so', 'for example', 'no doubt', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.270175438596 0.229887763892 118% => OK
Verbs: 0.124561403509 0.158761421928 78% => OK
Adjectives: 0.10701754386 0.0866891130778 123% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0368421052632 0.046263068375 80% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0421052631579 0.0685040099705 61% => OK
Prepositions: 0.136842105263 0.118717715034 115% => OK
Participles: 0.0245614035088 0.0351676179071 70% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.69310505628 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0315789473684 0.0309702414327 102% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.10701754386 0.0887237588012 121% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0157894736842 0.0209618222197 75% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0105263157895 0.0139019557991 76% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3132.0 2387.08602151 131% => OK
No of words: 522.0 408.028673835 128% => OK
Chars per words: 6.0 5.86048508987 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.77988695657 4.48200974243 107% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.340996168582 0.338922669872 101% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.27969348659 0.251872472559 111% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.208812260536 0.174417080927 120% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.139846743295 0.112833075102 124% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69310505628 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 248.0 212.727598566 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.475095785441 0.524397521467 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 55.6856178792 59.2087087015 94% => OK
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6684587814 121% => OK
Sentence length: 20.88 20.5533526081 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.7348334978 48.84282405 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.28 120.699889404 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.88 20.5533526081 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.36 0.644075263715 56% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.54480286738 126% => OK
Readability: 48.849348659 45.7405998639 107% => OK
Elegance: 2.12068965517 1.45489161554 146% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328818867718 0.300154397459 110% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0972299940064 0.103427244359 94% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0750019296017 0.0752933317313 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.488659285841 0.497263757937 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.167348565792 0.151897553556 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133256476469 0.114077575197 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0810642627687 0.0781384742642 104% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.492883860117 0.336927656856 146% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.00254387590493 0.067059652881 4% => Paragraphs are so close to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.255958157077 0.210909579961 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0493266120709 0.0618886996521 80% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8870967742 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.86379928315 129% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 13.0 8.42114695341 154% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.4623655914 203% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 18.0 13.6433691756 132% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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