Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In order to be well-informed, a person must get information from many different news resources.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Medias and news resources are one of the biggest ways to become informed about all the things happening around the world. Each of them discusses a specific aspect of a topic, and it makes it necessary to use different resources to get all needed information. In my view, people must have a look on different resources to have a general knowledge about different topics, and I would like to elaborate on my opinion with the following reasons.
First and foremost, each of the news medias are inclined to a especial political power and they do are not neutral to get people accurate information. One of the main ways politician use to stay in power is to using news medias to deliver modified news about especial topics, and based on this point, none of the are enough reliable to seek information from them. People are well-aware of this point and because of that prefer to to keep going by different medias or news resources. To bring an example I can mention to one of my personal experiences. Two years ago, as the deal between my country, Iran and other European countries we could receive lots of investments in our country which could have huge impacts on my country. But, some of the politicians in Iran were against this deal, and because of that did not let some medias to write about any of these investments. When I heard from one of my friends who is living in France that our countries had signed a big deal, I was really surprised that why I did not hear about it in national news. After that I tried to check different national and international news resources to get information, and this experience was one of the reasons why I believe people should use different resources to get well-informed.
Second, most of the news resources do not include different topics in their news, and by using them people can be aware of just a small part of the reality. There are lots of news resources which keep people update about political issues, and do not include any news related to environment or social movements. When people use these kinds of news materials, they cannot have a complete view of different topics. As an example, I would like to mention one of the news resources in my country, Iran. one of our national newspapers, called Keyhan just provides political information without referring to any other kind of topics. When people read this news paper, they cannot understand what impacts a political decision may have on environment, and they will not be well-informed. Last year, when this news paper published an article about a new policy regarding the production of cars, everyone thought it can be such a great consequence, but when other medias talked about other aspects of the topic, people could realized that this policy is not that much good that it seems. That is another reason for holding this idea that people should use different news resources.
To sum up, thanks to the presence of different news medias and resources it is not hard to be well-informed. By using different types of them, people can analyze everything fully, and see different aspects of each topic. The bottom line is that, based on the presented justification, the key point for being well-informed is using different news resources.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, may, really, regarding, second, so, well, as to, kind of, in my view, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 91.0 52.1666666667 174% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2689.0 1977.66487455 136% => OK
No of words: 562.0 407.700716846 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7846975089 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.86893614481 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68696766176 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 212.727598566 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.439501779359 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 849.6 618.680645161 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 10.0 1.86738351254 536% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.8624761612 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.227272727 100.406767564 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5454545455 20.6045352989 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.59090909091 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 16.0 4.88709677419 327% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213533607756 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.078499517913 0.076458572812 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492982153661 0.0737576698707 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154765105283 0.150856017488 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.026303664155 0.0645574589148 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 11.7677419355 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 86.8835125448 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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