Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In order to be well-informed, a person must get information from many different news resources.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Human beings have different ways to get valuable news in order to become well aware of things going around them. In fact, it is important that a person should have the intelligence to choose the best possible resource to better understand the facts. Many people depend on just one or two news outlets and blindly believe whatever they broadcast. In my opinion however, it is better to refer all possible news resources to get the complete information for a variety of reasons.
First of all,referring many news outlets is important because of the fact that many news channels are not hundred percent truthful to the general public. We live in a corrupted world and most news outlets are controlled and manipulated by government or private agency who want to make money for their selfish objectives. For instance, I recently went through an article in a local newspaper in my hometown pointing out the drawbacks of a political reader in my county. As I was curious to know much about it ,I asked the locals about their leader. Surprisingly, I got entirely different information from those folks who were huge fans of the political leader. Latter, I understood that it was the opposing party who were supporting this news channel to write against the people representative so that they can win the election next time. Thus, it is very clear that in this century, blindly believing any single news channel or news paper is foolish.
Secondly, our horizon of knowledge can be expanded by referring different news resources. People can get a broad understanding of the information because each news outlet speak about their own perspective of the issue. In the aforementioned example, I spent hours and days to collect the truth from different resources. All those activities include reading the local newspaper, surfing all possible online resources and also collecting the public opinion about the political candidate. After all these home work I not only understood the truth but also got a lot of information about the future impact of this news on my hometown. Hence, overview of many news resource really help people to update and improve knowledge about an event.
In conclusion, people should always consider many news-resources instead of just depending on a single one, in order to become more aware of the happenings. Those who trust on a single news outlet are more likely to get biased information and also have a narrow chance to enhance their knowledge. Thus, gathering valuable data from many different news outsources is recommended.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 13, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , referring
...or a variety of reasons. First of all,referring many news outlets is important because ...
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Line 3, column 55, Rule ID: BECAUSE_OF_THE_FACT_THAT[1]
Message: This phrase is redundant. Use simply 'because'.
Suggestion: because
...eferring many news outlets is important because of the fact that many news channels are not hundred perc...
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Line 3, column 107, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a hundred'.
Suggestion: a hundred
...he fact that many news channels are not hundred percent truthful to the general public....
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Line 3, column 139, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...are not hundred percent truthful to the general public. We live in a corrupted world and most ...
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Line 3, column 508, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
.... As I was curious to know much about it ,I asked the locals about their leader. S...
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Line 3, column 929, Rule ID: NEWS_PAPER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'newspaper'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
Suggestion: newspaper
...ly believing any single news channel or news paper is foolish. Secondly, our horizon of...
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Line 5, column 651, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
...news on my hometown. Hence, overview of many news resource really help people to upd...
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Line 5, column 651, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun news seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much news', 'a good deal of news'.
Suggestion: much news; a good deal of news
...news on my hometown. Hence, overview of many news resource really help people to update a...
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Line 7, column 333, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun news seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much different news', 'a good deal of different news'.
Suggestion: much different news; a good deal of different news
...dge. Thus, gathering valuable data from many different news outsources is recommended.
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Line 7, column 333, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...dge. Thus, gathering valuable data from many different news outsources is recommended.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, thus, well, after all, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2134.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 423.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04491725768 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53508145475 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78502449932 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524822695035 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 677.7 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.0177101095 48.9658058833 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 106.7 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.15 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 5.45110844103 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196127051435 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0673467934746 0.076458572812 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0461697091226 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135262252246 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0235990176657 0.0645574589148 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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