Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In the past it was easier to identify what type of career or job would lead to a secure, successful future.
Job and job security have been a big worry since human live in a society. Nowadays, with the uniqe world village it is so hard to be update so that you can a good job without need to improve yourself in a continues way. Some people believe that in the past it was easier to find what type of job sould lesd to asecure, successful future, while some disagree. in my point of view, in this high level profecional job market yoiu should be very smart to find a good secure and successful carrier. The following prageraph will discuse this issue more.
First and foremost, with the big advancment in sciencs and technologies many of jobs and carriers need high level of education or skills, which get the job positions more difficult to afford by ordinary people. For instance, my brother apply to work in a pharmacy after getting the pharmacy technicien license after 6 months classes and field education. After starting this job, he found that he should participate to a series of co-educatiion classes while he is working to review his license. I think some decades ago, working in such easy job did not need such huge tedius education and practicing.
The second factor that should be considered is, this improvement in the economy and existance of huge companies that are working in each field like retail, it is very difficult for personal interprenoure to start a spruting business and job. For example, there are many companies which they are looking for any inovative or creative idea, to invest huge money on them. these kind of companies buy the new ideas cheap from the young inventors and after providing the new brand products with the huge amont of cash flow they can combat with any individual investor. It is clear, that nobody can make a successful business alone and compete with this multi millioner companies.
To make a long story short, it should be mentioned that secure and successful jobs are more demanding in this high specialized world. Any kind of jobs need contemporary investigation and research to remain in the job market alive. This should be teach to young job seeker that they should prepare themselves to be updated every time to achive their goals of a secure a money making job.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, second, so, while, for example, for instance, i think, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1835.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 385.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76623376623 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55386366092 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542857142857 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 583.2 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4253432944 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.6875 100.406767564 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0625 20.6045352989 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9375 5.45110844103 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163517001537 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0580163145899 0.076458572812 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555359346774 0.0737576698707 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103127237141 0.150856017488 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.068827883065 0.0645574589148 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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