Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
transportation plays a significant role in society, especially in the current generation. so, there has been no shortage of doubt about how it could impact on future. However, the question is whether or not the automobile sales will increase in future? some people believe as the technology grows, the sales becoming double in future. On the other hand, I personally feel the motor vehicles sales might decline in the future for reasons I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, automobiles arose pollution; which is not good for the environment because it depletes the oxygen levels. some places are exposed to heavy pollution and the government implement laws for controlling personal vehicles. india government is the best example to illustrate this, they recently decided to stop vehicles enter into downtown because of heavy pollutions. if anybody overcome the laws, they should pay the huge fine as a penalty. what more, the car sales fall down to twenty percent in the last two years.
In addition to that, car maintenance is too expensive, especially the middle-class people. because it needs insurance, fuel charges, and other monthly services. my friend Alex is the best example to illustrate this. when we were studying bachelor degree at a University of Texas, he brought a new car, rather using college transportation. initially, he was so happy with his new car, but later he faced a lot of financial difficulties to maintain his car because of the high gas price and insurance, as a result, he stopped using his car and started to use public transport.
In conclusion, in the new two decades, people definitely not prefer a personal car. while the population growing rapidly, the government obviously restrict the personal vehicles to protect the climate. On top of that, the rapidly increasing cost of living leads to limit the car sale.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, while, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1564.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 308.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07792207792 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82105305887 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62987012987 0.524837075471 120% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.3900733435 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.8888888889 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1111111111 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.55555555556 5.45110844103 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.5376344086 271% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121164842268 0.236089414692 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0304187429194 0.076458572812 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0299925807278 0.0737576698707 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.063361806137 0.150856017488 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.025935819888 0.0645574589148 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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