Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
By the invent of various new technologies and automobiles, it is clear that this inventions also leads us to lots of problems and diseases. From my perspective, I agree with the statement,that compared to the present there will be fewer cars in the future.
To begin with, the world population increases every year, with this there is also the increase in the land rate, food rate, hospital rate and so on. The statistical data shows, the stock market graph goes higher while the people's economic condition remains the same. This also includes the rates of gas and diesel for everyday use of automobiles. This makes people to struggle to use cars, they could not afford gas or diesel for their commercial usage of cars.
Indeed, People could not afford gas or diesel for their cars, with that the government also increases the public transportation like buses and trains. In order to encourage people to travel and to control the traffic. People started using public transportation that is available with low fares. Additionally, today most of them care about their environment and the place they live. Individual's takes their own responsibility to stop and prevent pollution. Being aware of the causes and the consequences of newer technologies and the pollution factors, people started to move towards the solution. By using public transportation, they started reducing the environmental problems.
Furthermore, with the usage of cars, commuting was much easier and travelling made comfortable. But what are side effects of the easier lifestyle? Is it only the economy that affects?. Although, the modern lifestyle was easier to adapt, but it also has its side effects like people becoming obese, unhealthy, lack of exercise etc. Considering these effects, most of the people changed their lifestyle to the old era. Bicycles are now commonly used to travel short distances. People started avoiding cars and moved on to jogging, cycling to commute to the work places.
As a conclusion, I agree, there will be fewer cars than they are today in twenty years.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, while, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1740.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 337.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16320474777 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80998718242 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566765578635 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.9047963614 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.8571428571 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0476190476 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.47619047619 5.45110844103 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16073877356 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0477109058755 0.076458572812 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0752311851028 0.0737576698707 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125945689024 0.150856017488 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0974959527144 0.0645574589148 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.