Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is better for children to choose jobs that are similar to their parents’ jobs than to choose jobs that are very different from their parents’ jobs.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In my perspective, choosing their job arbitrarily is a better choice for children. There are several reasons that makes me believe in this option. In the following paragraphs I will briefly describe three of these reasons.
First, children may have different skills than their parents. Every person have his own skills and abilities and even though children and parents may share some common capabilities, but it is better for children to choose their job irrespective of their parents. For example, my father is a tailor and produces wonderfully beautiful clothes but, despite lots of trainings, I really do not know even simplest skills of this job.
Furthermore, every individual have his own inclinations. Every person have his own characteristics and goals, so, it would be better for him to choose his own carrier and job with respect to his own goals. For example, in my case, I am really passionate about being an engineer in robotics and work in this field. Therefore, if I chose my father's job I would not enjoy my job and for the rest of my life I would suffer from an un-entertaining job.
At last, nowadays, there exists a wide variety of job in this modern community. With the progress of technology, many jobs have become uncommon and even some has been distinct totally. For instance, in the past, there were lots of jobs as shepherds but nowadays with the improvements of the technology, the traditional methods are not being used anymore and industrial animal husbandry is the only way. Therefore, practically not every job can be selected and also new jobs need workers and hence some people have to choose other jobs than their parents.
These were some of my beliefs about this issue. I shared my own experiences in this field. To sum up, I believe although, choosing parents jobs may have some benefits such as learning from their experience and being well-known but in the most cases it would be better for children to choose their own job with respect to their skills and inclination rather than their parents, because they will live their whole life doing this job and it would be a misery to do a boring uninteresting job especially for such a long time.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, but, first, furthermore, hence, if, may, really, so, therefore, well, even so, for example, for instance, such as, to sum up, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.0286738351 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1817.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 375.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84533333333 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71036988046 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485333333333 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 561.6 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 91.8268643175 48.9658058833 188% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.882352941 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0588235294 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.17647058824 5.45110844103 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.361365811647 0.236089414692 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119206852775 0.076458572812 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111689155284 0.0737576698707 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235846495697 0.150856017488 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539763816387 0.0645574589148 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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