Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is better for children to choose jobs that are similar to their parents' jobs than to choose jobs that are very different from their parents' jobs.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The debate on whether children should follow their parent's footsteps and choose the same jobs as their parents or choose different works has garnered a range of views. Nowadays, many are adamant that a myriad of elements should be taken into consideration to examine the constructive and destructive facets of this issue. Some people posit that young people should strike their path and choose a profession different from their parent's jobs. On the other hand, some others take the opposite side and disagree. From my vantage point, I agree with the former group and a ver that each child should select the profession he/ she likes. I feel this way for reasons, which I will explore in the following paragraphs.
The first exquisite point to be considered is that everyone has his nature. In a narrow condition, the nature of a child does not resemble the nature of his/her parents; a child cannot has the same profession as his parents. A vivid example that can be given to shed light on the subject is one from my experience. My mother was a school teacher. Fortunately, she is an excellent talker with a very strong personality that allowed her to teach a huge number of students and had never felt afraid. However, I have the opposite nature of my mother. I could never talk in front of people like she did; therefore, I did not choose the teaching profession.
Secondly, another reason which deserves some words to say is that parents should respect their children's choices in life and allow them to discover their passions. Although parents can guide their children when they choose a similar profession to their parent's job, parents should let their children decide their future and select the profession they like. For instance, in the past, my grandfather had a small bakery in his neighborhood, and he always wished that my father would pursue the works in the bakery. However, my father had never liked the work in this bakery and eventually my grandfather respect my father's choice.
To wrap it up, contemplating all aforesaid reasons, one can soon realize the importance of encouraging our children to select their unique profession and pursue their dreams far from their parents' wishes and desires.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, i feel, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1853.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 375.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94133333333 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58804087208 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 559.8 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0701186386 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.944444444 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8333333333 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11111111111 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293626580697 0.236089414692 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0817909209929 0.076458572812 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113967368907 0.0737576698707 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178202993652 0.150856017488 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0913050209018 0.0645574589148 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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