Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays with unprecedented rate of coming information, people are being assailed by the news of all events, happening in all corners of the world. As far as news of these events are concerned, some are of the opinion that these information are important, while others belive that it is not mandatory to know all of them. I-for one- subscribe to the latter idea on the groung that these various information are source of confusion, stress, and also wasting of time.
To begin with, we need important data about our life to be successful, while inundating by news of miscellaneous, unrelated subjects we would not able to attain our necessary information from those news. Moreover, we will lose our concentration and some mundane matters would preoccupy our mind which hinder us from focusing on crucial aspects of our life.
Secondly, there are always some upsetting events happening in some places. If people follow all these news it could bring huge amount of stress to them, which bothers them always. For instance, I used to watch the TV news about the Abola disease phenomenon in the Africa; after a while I had a phobia of spreading that illness to our country and I always was thinking about it, which made me nervous.
Last but not least, given the consumerist disposition of the human beings, no room is left for squandering the most precious gift of life-time. Most of the events occuring in any places do not have useful information for us and by spending time on them people waste their cherishable time. While, they could utilize their vauable time on getting beneficial information and do better works.
All in all, taken into account what was already mentioned, I do believe that its unnecessary to spend time to find out about all the events everywhere, because it causes distract for people, makes stress, and wastes our time. Undoubtedly, its better to put this energy to aquire relevant, required information in the span of everyone's life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 224, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this information' or 'these informations'?
Suggestion: this information; these informations
...concerned, some are of the opinion that these information are important, while others belive that...
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Line 2, column 193, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this news' or 'those newses'?
Suggestion: this news; those newses
...o attain our necessary information from those news. Moreover, we will lose our concentrati...
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Line 3, column 96, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this news' or 'these newses'?
Suggestion: this news; these newses
...ng in some places. If people follow all these news it could bring huge amount of stress to...
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Line 3, column 172, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[3]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually not used at the end of a sentence.
...t of stress to them, which bothers them always. For instance, I used to watch the TV n...
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Line 3, column 348, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[5]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put after the verb 'was'.
Suggestion: was always
...ading that illness to our country and I always was thinking about it, which made me nervou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1633.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 332.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9186746988 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67680605962 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58734939759 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.5344092749 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.615384615 100.406767564 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5384615385 20.6045352989 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23076923077 5.45110844103 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116090048385 0.236089414692 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0433496693263 0.076458572812 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0202013678971 0.0737576698707 27% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0636730990543 0.150856017488 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00806851678656 0.0645574589148 12% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 11.7677419355 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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