Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In today's world, everything is developing. As a matter of fact, almost every country is trying to take advantage of the current situation. So, it is crucial to know about events occurring around the world. Even though some people are disapproved of this idea when there is not a possibility for our daily life to be influenced by those, but, as for me, I would like to support it. There are two main reasons why I feel this way, which are going to be elaborated on in the following essay.
In the first place, always there is a chance that you have misunderstood the situation. In other words, in some cases, people may not be thoroughly aware of the process, and if the event is really having effect on their daily life. With respect to the sociology research, as a case in point, accomplished in the University of British Columbia on June 5, 2009, it can be distinctly understood that 51 percent of analyses about the events happening around the world, which are done by the United States government in 2008, are somewhat wrong. So, as a wise person once said, "The more careful you be when analyzing some data, the more success you would get." Thus, it is not true that your analysis is always true.
There is also the fact that discerning events occurring around the world would lead us to innovative ideas. An experience in my own life can be an appropriate example to illustrate this. My brother, John, who is working in the United States’ government, is always telling me that had he a second possibility to come back to his childhood, he would definitely begin to watching world news every day due to learning from them. Therefore, it is significant to distinguish happenings around the world in order to learn from them.
So what are we to conclude? If taking into account all the factors mentioned in the article, is not it crystal clear that it is necessary to look around us carefully? Notwithstanding other people's opinion insisting on disapproving this strategy, I, personally, assert that it is more likely for the former point of view to be of more value.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'really', 'second', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'as for', 'i feel', 'as a matter of fact', 'in other words', 'in some cases', 'with respect to', 'in the first place']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.187648456057 0.229887763892 82% => OK
Verbs: 0.171021377672 0.158761421928 108% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0665083135392 0.0866891130778 77% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0570071258907 0.046263068375 123% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0688836104513 0.0685040099705 101% => OK
Prepositions: 0.128266033254 0.118717715034 108% => OK
Participles: 0.0546318289786 0.0351676179071 155% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.73797758314 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0403800475059 0.0309702414327 130% => OK
Particles: 0.00237529691211 0.00188951952338 126% => OK
Determiners: 0.0926365795724 0.0887237588012 104% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0166270783848 0.0209618222197 79% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0166270783848 0.0139019557991 120% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2108.0 2387.08602151 88% => OK
No of words: 366.0 408.028673835 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.75956284153 5.86048508987 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.48200974243 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.322404371585 0.338922669872 95% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.204918032787 0.251872472559 81% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.155737704918 0.174417080927 89% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.131147540984 0.112833075102 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73797758314 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57650273224 0.524397521467 110% => OK
Word variations: 66.1657004294 59.2087087015 112% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6684587814 77% => OK
Sentence length: 22.875 20.5533526081 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.8658228185 48.84282405 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.75 120.699889404 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.875 20.5533526081 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.125 0.644075263715 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.54480286738 72% => OK
Readability: 43.3668032787 45.7405998639 95% => OK
Elegance: 1.248 1.45489161554 86% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.409398445744 0.300154397459 136% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0857657089884 0.103427244359 83% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0525084884727 0.0752933317313 70% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.538861452461 0.497263757937 108% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.146172475356 0.151897553556 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.17238718338 0.114077575197 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0820640361148 0.0781384742642 105% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.364174128408 0.336927656856 108% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0350724128757 0.067059652881 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.28963817377 0.210909579961 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0137613897961 0.0618886996521 22% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8870967742 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.91756272401 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 8.42114695341 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.75985663082 145% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 13.6433691756 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.