Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
A glance at people attitude toward events around the world brings to the light a question that has provoked a debate several times, namely, whether we should notice every events happening around the world or not. In my opinion, as a foreign immigrate to USA, all of us are part of a huge society which we call humanity. Although some people believe that they have their own responsibilities to work on, I assert that we should devote some part of our life to understand the situations of other people and sympathy with hapless individuals.
The foremost reason why I am supporting this idea lies in the fact that we live in a global village that has butterfly effects which simply means that even flying an insect can cause a flood in the other side of the world. For example, the first world war started from Spain, which people considered it unimportant and neglected to ponder about their hardships. As a matter of fact, after a while, the fire of fight spread all over the universe and nobody could control it. Therefore, every thing that happens around the world has an impact on our life.
Another subtle point that I should deem is the fact that individuals are not able to change the conditions without union. For instance, if people in the France are striking to raise their income, citizens of Canada must show their respect to this attempt. On the other hand, if Saudi Arabia government kills some of opponents, we have to declare our opposition. Moreover, if we assist other citizens, it is more likely they aid us whenever we need. Hence, people can improve the environment if they take every events serious and do not concentrate on their own tasks.
Admittedly, every day we hear a lot of different news that we cannot respond to all of them. A person has limited time and must solve many problems in the real life. Nevertheless, the social media facilitate it for us to get the newest information and show our feelings. Even one click can increase the rate of disapproval and alter the laws. Recently, a study at Harvard University, department of psychology, shows that politicians check the Twitter and Facebook to understand people comments and will change their mind if they see people disagree.
Due to aforementioned argument explored in the previous statements, I strongly recommend my friends to follow news and know that indifference is not helpful.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 309, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'some of', you should use 'the' ('some of the opponents') or simply say ''some opponents''.
Suggestion: some of the opponents; some opponents
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, as a matter of fact, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1977.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 409.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8337408313 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64932900407 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574572127139 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 620.1 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9822190606 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.833333333 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7222222222 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.27777777778 5.45110844103 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146351812059 0.236089414692 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0422970168194 0.076458572812 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0393902825795 0.0737576698707 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0778512238479 0.150856017488 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0311267848036 0.0645574589148 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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