Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Our modern era has gifted us sophisticated technologies in which everyone has access to news about the entire world just by one click. However, some critics believe that it is not necessary for people to know about the events which are irrelevant to their daily life. Personally speaking, the former argument sounds rational to me by the following reason.
First, the news is the source of exhaustion. Indeed, the new channels repleted with exaggerating information about people who are suffering from hunger in Africa, war in the middle east, terrorist attacks in Europe, etc. There is no doubt that this news is heartbreaking for any human beings but many of us are vulnerable individuals who can not make any significant transformation in those people's lives. Thus, I must admit that there is no weight on exposing our mind to venoms coming out of this news.
Second, most of the news' information are fake. For instance, I know the details about the recent protests which happened in Iran as some of my close friends gave me. But then you could see much breaking news in the BBC and Voice of America were narrating many odd stories which were nothing but knitted fantasies. I mean, who can recognize the news' right from wrong as they do not rely on truth when delivering the happenings. So it is not reasonable to hear some decisive information about the other place of the world which we do not have related connection to them
Third, it is somehow a waste of time. In fact, contemporary hectic life has made us be delicate about what we spend our time. Therefore we have to focus on knowing our surrounding as the priority. Undoubtedly, our country has enough news which is related directly to our life like the next presidential election, new rules about paying tax, etc
All in all, the mentioned reason may soon convince one as it is more beneficial for us getting to know the news which is directed to our daily life as it preserves our time and energy by being far from the perilous and customized news which has no worth for our life
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 127, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
... delicate about what we spend our time. Therefore we have to focus on knowing our surroun...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, second, so, then, therefore, third, thus, for instance, i mean, in fact, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1697.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 360.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71388888889 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61069588897 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 86.8000512033 48.9658058833 177% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.133333333 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 5.45110844103 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146614902542 0.236089414692 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.050049294518 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0374076012266 0.0737576698707 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0894865251633 0.150856017488 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409837108283 0.0645574589148 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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