Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more important for governments to spend money to improve Internet access than to improve public transportation.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, regarded to rapid developments in technology, the demand for proper internet access is on the most important difficulties communities have to deal with. but between developments in the transportation industry and the internet industry, which one should be considered with higher priority? In my opinion, the internet industry is the one needs more attention, mainly because of the following reasons.
First and foremost, internet is a newer development so the infrastructures in this industry are not advanced yet. Although, there have been many valuable and tremendous works done on transportations infrastructures since many years ago. To make my point more clear, in Tehran subway stations and rapid bus paths has been created since many years ago but this modern city still lacks the modern infrastructure of high-speed internet which provide internet access without temporary disconnections. Thus, there are more works have to be done on internet infrastructures than transportation.
Moreover, there are many preplanned projects already in the transportation industry that are going to be implemented. However, since internet industry is relatively new in the world, there are not that many plans for its future. making these plans will require a huge budget which should be provided be the governments.
On the other hand, there are many other industries tied to internet industry which are waiting for it to grow. one of them is the other target, transportation industry. The automatic scheduling plan of trains requires major developments in the internet industry to make sure it works without any problem. Also, the modern internet-based applications for renting taxies are quite dependant on internet connections.
Additionally, a secure internet connection is of the most important prerequisites for doing research in a country. these researches will make progress in all industries so all industries are to some extent related to the internet industry these days.
All in all, from what I have discussed above, the internet industry has become one of the most important industries in countries playing a major role in their developments. internet access is one of the basic needs of any society that should gain more attention.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, still, thus, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 43.0788530466 37% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1942.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 349.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56446991404 4.8611393121 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18205904889 2.67179642975 119% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.495702005731 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 600.3 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5953463684 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.888888889 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3888888889 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137295683091 0.236089414692 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0556329418345 0.076458572812 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451992218579 0.0737576698707 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.08189494476 0.150856017488 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338777595355 0.0645574589148 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 11.7677419355 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 58.1214874552 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 10.9000537634 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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