Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Throughout the history, making a friend is one of the most important things in human's life.some people Believe that old friends are unique but, others believe making new friends are important than keeping olf friends.
As far as I am concern, keeping olds friends are very precious for me for two main reasons.
First and foremost, old friends have known every detail about me and my life and this narrow details could Be very influential for me because if I have big trouble in some situations only the old friend with these Background knowledge could help and solve my problems.
For example, I had an old friend who named Mehdi, and we had our friendship from military service duration.
Two days ago I had a catastrophic financial problem. I was very stressful that day and couldn't thought about Anythings after talking with Mehdi about that bad condition, Mehdi by knowing my manner suggest two Possible solutions and I choose one of those suggestion and that was very helpful for me.as you can see if I Have new friend without any knowledge about my background, he or she couldn't solve my problems.
Secondly, just with an old friend we could make deep memory and remember that wonderful memory because Old memory never forget and flashback to this kind of memory could be very amazing and could make a Smile in our lips.
For example, I and Mehdi were in military service in the same garrison, we slept on the old camp bed and It was very noisy and uncomfortable and we can not jolt during the night because that camp bed was very Noisy and other maybe awake. This memory was very memorable for me and Mehdi and every time I Mention that camp bed that night lead to laughing very much.
As a result some people maybe believe that making new friends are more important than keeping old Friends but I think old friends not only, is very precious and helpful for me but also could remind very Attractive memory for me.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
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Message: Did you mean 'this suggestion' or 'those suggestions'?
Suggestion: this suggestion; those suggestions
... Possible solutions and I choose one of those suggestion and that was very helpful for me.as you...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...nowledge about my background, he or she couldnt solve my problems. Secondly, just with...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d was very Noisy and other maybe awake. This memory was very memorable for me an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example, i think, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 52.1666666667 46% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1588.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 342.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6432748538 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34702631854 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.491228070175 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 487.8 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.1344086022 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 89.6004464275 48.9658058833 183% => OK
Chars per sentence: 158.8 100.406767564 158% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.2 20.6045352989 166% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.1 5.45110844103 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.53405017921 176% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168268458475 0.236089414692 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.079736833356 0.076458572812 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0774754913836 0.0737576698707 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.098646873141 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.075250199393 0.0645574589148 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 11.7677419355 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.89 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 86.8835125448 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 10.002688172 170% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.0537634409 155% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.247311828 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.