Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Modern transportation and shipping has made the world a better place to live.
Use specific reasons and details to explain your opinion.
Nowadays it is difficult to imagine our lives without international trade or travel. Nevertheless, decades ago those activities were not as common. Technological advances on transportation has revolutionized the way we live. Personally, I believe that developement on transportation and shipping has improved our lives. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, advances on transportation has made the world more interconnected and convenient . Modern means of transportation such as high speed trains, subways and airplanes have made travel easier and faster. For instance, when I was a child although travelling by air was possible it was still not common and only wealthy people could afford it. If possible, people would use buses instead of planes because it was much cheaper even if that meant driving for long hours on the highway. Nowadays, thanks to the development of technology, the cost of air travelling has been greatly reduced. Now I can travel more frequently because plane tickets are more affordable. Thanks to that, I have visited several destinations both inside and outside my country, which has allowed me to learn more about different country´s history and culture. Travelling allows people to open their minds and get out of their comfort zone. If there were no modern transportation options, we would not be able to get fulfilling experiences such as travelling the world and meeting people from different backgrounds.
Secondly, the improvement of shipping processes have made international trade possible and affordable. International commerce has increased because costs of shipping, handling and transportation have declined as processes are more efficient and fast. For example, during my childhood it was uncommon to receive packages from abroad or buy things from the internet. Now I can frequently purchase items that are not available on my country. I believe there has been some improvement in my life because now I can easily access products that provide better value. Furthermore, we have a larger pool of options. Before e-commerce was common, we did not have much choices available at our local market. Thanks to shipping and transportation we are able to access a wider variety of products and services that can improve our living conditions.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that our daily lives have largely improved due to advances on modern transportation and shipping. The development on these aspects has positively impacted our way of living by making the world more interconnected.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 96, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...world more interconnected and convenient . Modern means of transportation such as ...
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Line 5, column 654, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
... e-commerce was common, we did not have much choices available at our local market. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, still, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2193.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 409.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36185819071 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14338015303 2.67179642975 118% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540342298289 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 684.9 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.8880413508 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.375 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0416666667 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.45110844103 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126446576294 0.236089414692 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0404562015275 0.076458572812 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462184956884 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0877552659902 0.150856017488 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0179820880323 0.0645574589148 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 10.9000537634 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 86.8835125448 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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