Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Modern transportation and shipping has made the world a better place to live.Use specific reasons and details to explain your opinion.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

Modern transportation and shipping has made the world a better place to live.

Use specific reasons and details to explain your opinion.

I strongly agree with the statement that modern transportation and shipping have made the world a better place to live and I have several reasons supporting my opinion.

First, In earlier times, we had to find the transporters and shippers to transport our luggage and other goods from one place to another. Moreover, we used to agree to all of their terms & conditions including higher transportation costs just to avoid the hassle of finding other transporters and compare all options. However, it has become really convenient to find, compare and book transporters only with few clicks on mobile applications.

Second, transportation and shipping used to take really long time to deliver the products due to lack of faster means of traveling whereas now, we have faster trains, buses, cars, and planes to transport goods and items within a very short period. Lesser transportation time gives us the freedom to book things even at the last moment of time urgently.

Finally, In older times, we didn't have internet facility and other tracking mechanisms to track our shipments which is not the case anymore. Additionally, with the introduction of online portals like Amazon where we can even order the items which we can't get of our own and delivery of goods takes place quickly.

In conclusion, transportation and shipping have become a lot easier in recent times with the introduction of faster vehicles and the internet adds easier access to goods worldwide and a way to track. The goods and products which could be medicines, luggage, household decorative items, and even the things we need for our daily household needs, all can be transported to us and our friends and family members without much inconvenience and efforts and with lesser costs.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, moreover, really, second, so, whereas, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 15.1003584229 20% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1483.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 289.0 407.700716846 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13148788927 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82886640489 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567474048443 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 618.680645161 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.164628973 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.3 100.406767564 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.9 20.6045352989 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.7 5.45110844103 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206582700732 0.236089414692 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0934011072307 0.076458572812 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116321353318 0.0737576698707 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146855796921 0.150856017488 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.146972009927 0.0645574589148 228% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 11.7677419355 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 58.1214874552 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.07 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200

Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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